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for A Royal Pain

by Vyper

schedule May 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
okay, i agree sessh is stronger then inu. but i think it takes sessh a while now.
since inu can do the meidou zangetsuha now. and even if it was a lucky shot.
did you forget inuyasha cut of sessh's arm.

chap 3 i kind of wonder why inuyasha cannot 'do it'with kagome properly.
care too explain it in the next chap?

because i know you are not a inuyasha basher.
thats why i asked.
person natasha
schedule May 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
really great chappie's poor inu wonder why he can't get it up and keep going. well can't wait for more to come.
schedule May 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter and the title of the fanfiction fits perfectly! I bet Sango wish she had of thought twice before almost killing Rin. Although I don't think Rin would approve of her lord's behavior. Great chapter, look forward to the next one!!!
person natasha
schedule May 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
really great story line. feel bad for all of them. so can't wait for more to come.