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What Did You Mean By (at least, that was what Sesshoumaru had thought at the time.) Tell Me Your Answer Just Go To (ZenaMcClain97@gmail.com). So Far So Good, Keep It Up And Runnen. There Is One Ting That I've Been Wondering Is, That When Your At The Title Screen That YourAble To See That It's Adult Rated; But Don't Know If It's a Lemon Or Not. (Lemon = Sex), If You Didn't Know. I'm Not Trying To Tell You What To Wright Or Type In This Case; But I Guess That What I'm Saying Is That Turn Down The Torcherd Part Of The Story An Add Little More Detail In the Lemons Part, It's Just A Though, Something To Think About, Is All.

From What You Dircribe Of Kouga Being A Beta, It's Just That From The Anime, What I'm Getting Out Of Kouga Personality Is That He Is Both (Alphas & Beta.) Would You Think Of Changing Kouga From Just A Beta To ALPHAS,Beta Instead.

I am thoroughly enjoying this. Please keep up the good work!

I had to go and read everything else you've written, and now I'm in love with this one. It's just not fair. I don't know if you plan on continuing this story -- considering everything going on with your life -- but I wanted to let you know I really enjoyed it.

What happened to updating this story? Its a Good Story with a great start.But, you have not updated it since 2013.
Hope you and your family are doing ok, I also hope you come back to update/finish this story.

I can't wait for more! And I think that Kouga should get Ari to ask Lord Sesshoumaru why Kouga couldn't get dressed in front of her and about the birds and the bees. Right in front of Kougra so Kougra can try not to laugh a him. Maybe include Shippo as well. I could just see Shippo including some wrong information that Sesshoumaru would then have to correct. A nice little family bonding over annoying Lord Sesshoumaru. maybe with the cat girl mostly watching except when asked a question or for her opinion. Maybe have Jaken also there grumbling and everything. Either way I can't wait for more so please please continue.

I can't wait for more! And I think that Kouga should get Ari to ask Lord Sesshoumaru why Kouga couldn't get dressed in front of her and about the birds and the bees. Right in front of Kougra so Kougra can try not to laugh a him. Maybe include Shippo as well. I could just see Shippo including some wrong information that Sesshoumaru would then have to correct. A nice little family bonding over annoying Lord Sesshoumaru. maybe with the cat girl mostly watching except when asked a question or for her opinion. Maybe have Jaken also there grumbling and everything. Either way I can't wait for more so please please continue.

nasty ugly fat mountain lion DEMONS!!...yuk.
this ending chappie was very cute.

This story was great! Please hurry and write more as soon as possible! Thanks for writing this story!

Even if it's short, it's always nice to see an update to a story you love :) And I'm oddly enjoying the new little Rin we have now ^.^ I hope inspiration hits you and we get to see more of this soon :)