AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Broken Promises

by cryptica

schedule February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story & very creative. I've enjoyed it very much. Rare to find a story that really draws me in to the plot, but this one definitely does. I love it when a written story diverges from the way the anime or manga goes. I hated how 'Inuyasha ~ The Final Act' ended in some ways. Probably because Inu ends up with Kagome. ;) But this story is awesome, and lets me think of the story ending in a much better way. Good luck with your Muse....I hope you can finish this. (I'm a beta-reader too, just in case you need one. Please don't hesitate to let me know.) Thanks so much for sharing this with us!
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh no Inuyasha is going to be raped! I hop Sesshy can save him.
schedule February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon it's awesome
person inuren
schedule November 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! I am addicted and can't wait for you to keep updating, please update and I can't wait till Shessomaru finds out if he's carrying pups.
person Vyper
schedule October 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I feel for Miroku and Kagome although I understand Sango and why she did as she did. I also love the sex scenes they are so hot. I look forward to your next update.
schedule October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Will we be getting another update soonish? I hope so i love this story and i want to know what happens with naraku and Sesshy! will Sesshy kill naraku? please tell me he does!?!?! poor Inuyasha he needs some loving! please update again soon i can't wait so long! i need more story! thanks good luck!
kit
person Vyper
schedule May 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru are so insatiable. I wonder if they can ever get enough of one another.
schedule April 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just read all 11 chapters in one sitting. I usually stop after a few paragraphs, but you've got me hooked. Your writing is unusually original and quite imaginative for this genre, not like the same old stuff seen over and over. I especially like how you turned the tables on the characters, and were able to keep them true to form. However, your real talant lies with your smut scenes - they were written beautifully, well done!
person kaylez24
schedule April 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chant it with me.

Smut.

Smut.

Smut.
person kaylez24
schedule April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Dum. Dum. Dum.
Tomorrow on Feudal Passions. Kagome is still reeling from the loss of the jewel and wonders just how she will ever return home. Sesshomaru is worried desperately over the injuries of his beloved Inuyasha. And Sango ponders her decision to save her brother and perhaps in the process kill the man she loves.

(in case you don't get this, the above is a Soap Opera spoof. LOL)