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January 26, 2019 at 12:00 AM
More please update soon
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September 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please update
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April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'd love to know what happened next
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July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this was ecellent. keep up the good work and writing. i cant wait for more
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June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
To give honest feedback, this was kind of weird for a lemon. It's mind boggling that a pure virgin wouldn't awake from a simple nap when someone was taking her virginity. And apparently when she finally did wake how we she know who was specifically mounting her from the back. I'll give you kudo's for trying, but I think it's be better if you proof read or let someone see your story before you post.
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April 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
mm pretty good so far. besides the slight spelling and grammar errors, it was well written. i like it. plz keep writing.
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April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!
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April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes continue! Did he realize she had passed out ro did he do that/ Please update son.