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by penumbra

schedule January 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lol! This is pretty awesome. I liked how you made all of the overt sexuality the 'normal' of their shard hunts. Great job!
person harpergunbunny
schedule December 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ha! This is pretty funny... although dont you think kagome might die from dehydration or something? Really soaking all the idols? Lol just joking, giving this story two thumbs up!
schedule November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very well done! Love the humor and the sarcasm. Keep it up!
schedule April 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome funny. Gotta love the plant goo. Awesome job, and I look forward ot more.

One idea I had was IY getting his poor peter stuck somewhere - knothole in the side of a wooden hut, maybe, trying to "surprise" Kagome with it. Except it doesn't go exactly as he'd planned... o_O