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for Fit For Dogs

by Arianawray

schedule March 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just love the story. it's hilarious, interesting and totally original. Only thing to complain about is the fact that i feel bad for sess. I mean inu is always trying to get away from him. And though i know that inu loves sess a lot, in every chapter so far, it always seems like sess is the one that actually wants inu. I know that inu is just pretending to be like that.. but still. It would be interesting to see where for once, inu becomes horribly jealous. And where, after inu threatens to leave, sess finally (pretends) gets tired of him, and says that he's gonna be gone for awhile. And we see how inu fares without sess around. Sorry, so far, as i've already said, the story is brilliant. but for some reason i feel that the scales are not equal, and feel that sess deserves a litttle better. :)
person SParker
schedule February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about 17...

I'm surprised Sesshomaru withheld himself THAT long!
schedule February 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, very hot. Poor little Inu, sounds like Sesshy's gonna give him about a two week long knot to deal with! Actually, that sounds immensely enjoyable for the pup! Great work, I can't wait to read more.
schedule February 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
x*D

rofl. Inuyasha,... he just never learns xD

-DM
person jdbbrz27
schedule February 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh man I loved it and I laughed so hard I really needed that. I especially loved the ending I can just see Sesshomaru screwing Inuyasha continually for the next two weeks to the point where Inuyasha can't even stand up or even sit up for awhile let along walk away. And the enjoyment Sesshomaru would get from doing everything to Inuyasha he wants to and forcing sweet little Inuyasha to stay out of pure exhaustion and pain in very intimate places boy I can sure be mean sometimes. And the old dog new tricks that was cute to especially poor Inuyasha trying to teach Sesshomaru how to have a sense of humor unfortunately he does it's just not one that anyone wants to experiance or enjoy mainly because it's usually the sadistic kind. I really hope you story wins cause it is so much funnier than the other ones the other stories I didn't even crack a smile and yours just makes me come out and laugh and giggle wonderfully thank you so much for your great sense of humor can't wait for the next installment I'm curious will Inuyasha stay or not after he can walk again.
schedule February 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
lol, the idea of a demon age conversion chart makes me laugh for some reason.
person Vyper
schedule February 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Your last story is funny and kind of kinky at the same time. I am sure Sesshoumaru knows a lot of tricks to keep Inuyasha entertained so he won't leave him again. I like the assertiveness that Sesshoumaru shows over Inuyasha although you have to admit that both dogs are old in human years. 17 is a pretty old dog if they are calculating everything correctly. Even so, Sesshoumaru doesn't look like a 37 year old. I should know, I am 38 and am not lucky enough to be a demon who stays beautiful and young as an immortal. However I still do not find myself related to apes or monkeys no matter what science tells everyone. I don't think I am human anyway since a lot of the human population is filled with idiots.
Anyway, great story and I look forward to more of your writing. I love these tales and the fact that you use their natural canine instincts against both brothers so well. Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha are both hotties, but people tend to forget they are indeed dogs so it is cool that you are treating them as such.
schedule January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
whohooooooooooooooooo!!!

yay! you brought me smile back to me tonight!! *hugs*
I LOVE your story *____*

roflmao xDDDD Sesshomaru and a badly trained dog? he hasn't been friggin' trained at all xDDDD
*tries to imagine the two of them with the dog trainer* *fits of laughter*

love you!
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
lol, I wonder what exactly he was doing to Inuyasha to provoke that kind of dialog...I'm with Kouga in the matter that it was worth it.
schedule January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You know, I can't help but laugh my fucking ass off whenever I read these stories. Wonderfully written and so original, and perfectly in character, which is a relative scarcity, unfortunately. You're not allowed to ever let this series end - you know that, right? I expect to see the chapters number in the hundreds one day.