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for Fit For Dogs

by Arianawray

person Vyper
schedule June 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like the thermomiter love scene. It would have been even better with Sess mounting Inuyasha, but maybe later they can do the dominance thing.
person jdbbrz27
schedule June 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was so funny I was giggling so hard. Sesshoumaru is so funny when he is so horny for Inuyasha I just couldn't stop laughing poor little Inuyasha how can he deal will he satisfy Sesshoumaru or tease him or just walk away the possibilities are endless and with the way you write probably hilarious as well. Although it would have been even better with a hot lemon or if Sesshoumaru had manage to put the thermometer in Inuyashas ass while he was so horny who knows what else would have went in after or during as well oh so hot.
schedule May 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ewwwww, but entertaining
person Aalto
schedule May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god... I nearly couldn't stop laughing! Damn good writing, keep it up.
person aleabeth
schedule May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
When I saw the chapter title, I thought "Oh NO.... please don't go there!!!"

I want to "thank you " for answering my prayers and Not Going There. *smile*
And even though you didn't, it was still funny. :D
person jdbbrz27
schedule May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well I gotta admit this wasn't as funny as the others but it was still cute a toilet bowl eww. And a panting Sesshoumaru does sound funny although I think I's rather like seeing him pant over Inuyasha being seductive and enticing but Sesshoumaru not being able to do anything about it that would be kinda funny. Or the vet like Inuyasha had to have his colon cleaned and Sesshoumaru watching and yearning to be the one inside of Inuyasha instead especially if Inuyasha was enjoying it a bit to much god now that sounds interesting. Well I'll be waiting for the next update.
person Vyper
schedule May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The drinking water out of the bathroom shower is cute and I liked how they shared the tap water. It was kind of sexy in fact with their tongues laping against each other.
person Katonie
schedule May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! This is hilarious! Please continue updating, this is too good to stop writing :D

Hugs & Kisses

Katonie
person aleabeth
schedule April 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Especially once Sesshomaru shoves that squeaky thing up his arse...

DID NOT!!!


LOL
person Vyper
schedule April 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lol.......squeeky toy.........