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A yes! Finally him, I figured it out when she sensed the shard coming towards her. Only he could be the one.

I love your fic btw, I've been following your story for a long time now. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I can't wait to see were this goes. I can't wait till the next chapter.

I was wondering for a bit if English wasn't your first language. Since you have stated that it isn't, you do use it quite well, even better than some of my students.

This is a very angsty story, and I have been enjoying it. Keep writing. I hope to see an update soon.

I actually like the way you depict 'conscious' Sesshoumaru's conflicting emotions, since that would be what we would expect of him. Keep up the good work! I always like to see charecters of fave anime being shown as closely possible as the original and even though his beast is different, he is acting the way he should. He doesn't like humans, is discomforted by the thought of mating one, but is honorable enough to owe up to what his beast has done. I love this fic!

Breathtaking story. This is the only Sesshomaru/Kagome story I've ever gotten interested in.
It's just simply addicting.

can't wait for the next chapter

Another great chapter and as always I am left wanting more. I just love were this story has gone. I never would have guessed that it would end up were it has. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Wahoo another update! I am always looking forward to the next update. I just LOVE this story!!

Your story is quite good, but you grammar and syntax may throw some people off a bit.And in chapter 16, something caught my attention and had my mind ticking. How was Kagome eating with a fork during the feudal era? I usually saw them eat with chopsticks. So I was just pondering over that.

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i jsut read all 31 chapters and i must say that i am completely enthralled with the story. its 4:04 am right now and i started reading at around 9 pm. i couldnt stop reading the story. its written very well and besides the ocasioal funky grammar and spelling, it was perfect. i cant believe that soru (my shortened version of sesshomaru's name) is in the modern time. i fell sorry for kagome. the whole raping thing sucked but i supose it was neccissary for he story to progress. i love soru/kagy pairings and this one was amazing. i couldnt believe how well the story went along. i really dont like the whole abuse she went through, but like i said its ok. i really hope to see them get to gether now. i mean soru is modern now and kagy might be able to heal herself from what his beast did. it is going to be hard for soru to controll his beast to behave 'modernly' but it would so be worth it if they could be together now. they need to be. she's so caught up in him, no matter what happened between them. its sad that everyone is dead. especially shippo. its kinda funny how kagy got along with rin so well. after all rin was her like great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, great, grandmother and what not. lol if you think about it they even look alike. hmmm it makes me think, do u think that might be true? sigh its late lol and i'm gunna end it here. plz update soon! i'm really enjoying this story.

psychoticly- ADT

ps.- this is just an afterword, but could u read my stories? i'm honestly not one of those people who just go around asking ppl to read their fics and all that jaz, but i would really appreciate your commetary. ja ne