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for The Tale of the Demon Lord

by Arianawray

person jdbbrz27
schedule September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome and so exciting and full of suspense. Poor sweet Inuyasha I almost cried as it is I got tears in my eyes almost throughout the chapter how do you do that any way make something so riviting. Well I think I may like Sesshoumaru's mom despite her really tacky sense of humer. And Naraku needs to be beaten with his balls cut off and then killed repeatedly the big creep how dare he try to take Sesshoumaru away from Inuyasha oooohhhh he makes me so mad. And it makes me curious to see what they intend to do about that nasty shard blunted or not it's still a major danger to Inuyasha so interesting this story is just great and I'll be waiting for the next update thank you so much for your wonderful imagination and for sharing it. I am very humbled to your amazing talents.
schedule September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Man, Sesshy is gonna go on the war path! Excellent work!!!
schedule September 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I know Sesshoumaru is all excited, eager and protective and out of his care element, but you’d think he’d have realized he didn’t ask Inuyasha to be his mate. *palm to the forehead* perhaps subconsciously he feared rejection.

I loved the slave bracelet, always liked that style J And the whole competitive nature coming forth in Sesshoumaru’s gift giving.

All I can say for the last bit is… bleep bleep bleepity OUCH!even more when they need to dig those shards out. *cringes* poor Inuyasha!
schedule September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! OH NO!! NO NO NO I knew the mirror breaking was a bad thing! Poor Inuyasha *sniffs*

Great update (and pardon me for reviewing here instead of on FFnet) Couldn't resist reading it once I saw it ^_^
schedule September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please update soon. what will happen next??????????????????????????????????????????????????????
schedule September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe this is how this chapter ends. This is just too CRUEL! I hope Inuyasha will be okay. It may sound horrible but this will probably be the best test for whether Sesshoumaru really does love him or not.
schedule September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh that monkey bastard Naraku! I knew it, I just knew that shard had to have changed shape or something!!
person jdbbrz27
schedule September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god what have you done please say he's not seriously injured forever oh my god I'm thoroughly devastated poor little Inuyasha how could that vicous horrible mirror thing, it demon whatever do that to sweet wonderful perfect Inuyasha I can't stand it please you must have to update soon before I cry my eyes out oh my god that's like one of the absolute worse yet most intriguing fight scenes I have ever read. Next to Sacred Trees of course. And I thought it was so sweet the ring and cuff set although I could never wear anything like that with a chain connecting them like that but still it was sweet and the description of the other gifts talk about appropriate gifts I loved it usually when a writer writes about giving Inuyasha gifts from a suiter there always way to girly things with Inuyasha's personality he would never enjoy but you did a really great job. Thank you so much for an amazing story and your fantastic imagaination I will be waiting for the next update with amazing anticipation and a bit of worry for my sweet little Inuyasha.
schedule September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How could you!!! I love it and hate it all at the same ohmygodohmygodohmygod!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wanna know what happens sooooo bad you're so cruel!!!! Ahhhh damn cliffhangers!!!!!! I think I might die of antisipation!! lol please please please update soon!!!!!
schedule September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu damn you naraku to hell you sick sadistic bastard >< i hope inuyasha will make it and sesshomaru is going to annihilate the spider clan i kinda feel sorry for the kids...kinda...but yeah i hope he makes it D:
can't wait to read the next chapter