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Sesshoumaru, did it ever occur to you that it as a trap to lure you from Inuyasha? Darn pride of his.

Wow possessive Sesshomaru I like that. I hope more sutors show up I love it when inu gets so much attention. LOL I still think Inu shouldve been the fairest in the land but opinions can change. Great update I eagerly await more.

Very nice work here! Loved the chapter!

Well If I were that wolf demon I would be laughing my butt off once the two were out of sight from Sesshoumaru's jealousy. I loved Sessh's mom hitting on Inuyasha I mean I would to and I'd stroke and pinch that oh so delicious bottom of his I mean who wouldn't unless your dead and even if I were dead I'd still want to do it. It's so cute how jealous Sessh is getting and he should be if your going to have a sweet, loving sexy hot young babe like Inuyasha well you kind of have to get use to him being hit on and also realize that he has nothing to worry about mainly because of who Inuyasha is and how devoted and loyal he is. Inuyasha's personality is such that he would never have any eyes or feelings for anyone other than the one he has given his heart to he's just to pure for that and always will be. I liked the chapter for those reasons especially Sessh's momma she is so beyond funny and I love her teasing ways it is so much like my own family always teasing each other especially if someone is to serious about something you did a good job. Thanks for sharing and I'll be waiting for the next update.

Dude! You can't just stop this story here!!! I love this story! I couldn't stop reading! Then you left it there and it made me sad. Please write more! I want to know what happens next!

man i don't know what to say

Excellent work here, loved it!

That was truly exciting. I loved Sesshoumarus declarations of love and it's not even really out of character at all if someone was in that position watching the one they loved with all their being in such pain and agony and knowing that they almost lost them and still could well it would only be natural no matter how cold someone is that warmth and love would come out of their mouths through thier own soul. And his declaration came from his soul and heart and not his brain and logic that is how true love works. It's also why you love your family but not always like them it's just a part of the bond of love. God I sound so corny sorry about that. And Sesshoumaru's interaction with his mom that was so touching and right for this occassion I also understand her flippant remarks when she first showed up some of us tend to react that way to extreme stress and situations it's a defense mechanism. And it was great that his mom understood and figured out Inuyasha in such a short time now that is a demonness who has lived and learned through a very long life. And the ending with Naraku now that was priceless and I loved it. His anger and fear of killing off the one he wants instead of the one he intended great writing on that part so very accurate of an enemy. And the bit with Kikyo and Kaede I love the addition of those two another great twist you are doing a really awesome job with this story and I appreciate alot not every story gives you a great plot along with the great lemons and I love both very much. Lemons are awesome but actual good stories mixed with them are much more awesome. I'll be waiting to see what happens next with Kikyo and Kaede and Inuyasha and with what Naraku plans next for his ever elusive prey.

that was not very nice

That was awesome and so exciting and full of suspense. Poor sweet Inuyasha I almost cried as it is I got tears in my eyes almost throughout the chapter how do you do that any way make something so riviting. Well I think I may like Sesshoumaru's mom despite her really tacky sense of humer. And Naraku needs to be beaten with his balls cut off and then killed repeatedly the big creep how dare he try to take Sesshoumaru away from Inuyasha oooohhhh he makes me so mad. And it makes me curious to see what they intend to do about that nasty shard blunted or not it's still a major danger to Inuyasha so interesting this story is just great and I'll be waiting for the next update thank you so much for your wonderful imagination and for sharing it. I am very humbled to your amazing talents.