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for The Tale of the Demon Lord

by Arianawray

schedule November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
getting soooo good. update soon.
person jdbbrz27
schedule October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aw man between this story and the story Strength you two writers are going to give me a heart attack the excitement and the amazing imaginations the two of you have jeez it's phenominal and fantastic and I thank you for sharing from the bottom of my excited heart. How dare Naraku be such a crazy son of a bitch the bastardly coward like he in any way has any right at all to even speak Inuyasha's name let alone be near him oh I hope they get that creepy jerk soon he is beyond all consumate evil you really did a great job there. Actually you've done a superb job as a whole in this update and the whole of the story. I can not wait to see what happens to the creep in Sessh's castle it was a shame though that poor Sessh had to lose his arm like he did and to that conceited asshole. Oh well I guess when it comes to making love to Inuyasha he'll just have to use his tongue more huh a little overtime with his tongue and his one arm and hand should more than make up for the lost other arm and hand besides it can make it even more enjoyable to Inuyasha and Sessh I mean that is a meal that I would certainly enjoy Inuyasha soup yum okay now I'm getting a little way to naughty so I will now go and send myself to bed oh I do hope I dream yum sorry didn't mean to gross you out been awhile since I've had a good night's sleep and I'm a little punchy so I apoligize for anything that may have been overboard anyway thank you so much for sharing can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH SHIT

Holy god, when Sesshoumaru died, I cried. Seriously. Thank you for this story. This is amazing. So looking forward to the next update!!
schedule October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE, PLEASE, LET SHESS GET HIS ARM BACK!!! HE COULD RE-GROW IT!! OR HIS MOMMY COULD CONJURE HIM UP ONE!!! OR HE COULD FIND A HEALER LIKE OREHIME FROM BLEACH WHO CAN BRING THE BODY BACK IN TIME TO FIX THE WOUND LIKE IT WAS NEVER THERE TO BEGIN WITH.....THERE ARE SO MANY OPTIONS AND I HATE SHESSH WITHOUT HIS ARM.....HE'S THE KILLING PERFECTION....YOU CAN'T BE PERFECTION IF YOU'RE MISSING A LIMB!!!!
schedule October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
getting there
schedule October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well what do you know, two little sex slaves for the price of one. Hopefully their intelligence will grow in the next few chapters. I am loving this so far though and your character development is wonderful. The plot also sucks you in so you can't wait for what happens next. Keep up the good work.
schedule October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
no word on sessy
schedule October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I thought the Mr. Tree was cute too. I'm kinda glad to see Kagome and Sango here. I've never hated Kagome, they make awesome friends, I just think Inuyasha deserved someone else. I'm releaved to see the shard out, but I can't help but worry what's being done to Sesshoumaru in the meantime. Go get him Inuyasha!
schedule October 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work! Cannot wait for more!
person jdbbrz27
schedule October 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was awesome I knew it had to be bokusen'o I just knew it and the way they had to take the shard out was totally awesome and unique kudos to you for your fantastic imagination I have not read anything like that in any other story and I was thrilled reading it. I just know this adventure to save Naraku will also be amazing and the fight as well I'm a little nervous how Sesshomaru is going to be but none the less I can't wait. I just hope Sesshomaru is not the one having any puppies that's just ewwwww I mean he is sooooo not the type to be able to carry a baby he's just not strong enough emotionally and he really does not have the sensitivity to carry it off. I could never no matter what see him doing it and pulling it off believably. Anyway I can not wait for the next update with your amazing imagination I just know it will be so worth the wait to read even though now I am just sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for it.