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for The Tale of the Demon Lord

by Arianawray

person Vyper
schedule November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was a nice ending to the story. I think it is funny as hell that Inuyasha was 'milked' by his Mother in Law. That was funny as hell.
schedule November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aw that was a great ending. I am sad that it is over but am very happy that they got the family that they were wanting. Kudos on a job well done and a great story on top of that. I do hope to read more of your great work to come in the future. Thanks for everything and beautiful ending.

MadamDragon
person jdbbrz27
schedule November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was so adorably perfect a perfect fairy tale and I thank you for writing such a lovely story and sharing you amazing imagination with us all. I am humbled and thankful for such great stories that I can read and enjoy.
schedule November 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Of Course I stick with you. It is/was a very good story. There must be an epilogue 1 kid from the both of them...inuyasha was able to conceive and they had 1 kid at least. But I I am glad they are happy. Thnx for this story I hope that you keep on writing, and I will keep on reading. Thank You,

Madamdragon
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Truly EPIC!
person jdbbrz27
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story so full of intrigue, and excitement and love very very good and you are a really good writer as well can't say I cared much for the last chapter I just didn't find it very satisfying but that's okay I still loved the story itself so thank you so much for sharing your wonderful ability and imagination.
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
theres no way we can abandone such a goo story no matter how many chapters, each chapter was gripping and made us want more hell i still want more! i want to know what happens with their kiddys (or should i say puppies? ;)) anyways if this ends up being the last chapter is was a good one and a fitting end so very sereane! (sorry i suck at spelling) thank you for the story and i hope theres more stories to come!
Kit
person Vyper
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story totally rocks. I love the last chapter it was so romantic. I look forward to the epologue when you are finished.
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm sad it's ending, but glad it's ending so well. I wonderful story of emotion and action. Thank you.
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this story has been an amazing journey and i enjoyed every twist and turn you took with it, even the naraku evetns (scowls) but it was part of the story which made it all more enticing. thank you for sharing this and i hope to see more fics from you in the future :D