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for The Tale of the Demon Lord

by Arianawray

schedule January 26, 2018 at 12:00 AM

If I didn't know better... I'd think you were enjoying Sesshomaru's torture. I don't understand this style. If your taking the "realistic" approach, then Inuyasha would NEVER desire his brother. To have him desire him after all the "molestation" protest... Well THAT is sick!

schedule January 24, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Damn it...this is torturous.

schedule January 22, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Damn it... Now you've gone and made me cry! This!!! Right here:

"...So he decided to make a wish that he would be safe, and loved, and also brave and strong enough to face whatever confronted him in life..."

Yes. That stroked my heart...

 

schedule January 21, 2018 at 12:00 AM

OMG THIS is some hawt Alpha Dominance right here! OooooU!!! I would've taken him back into the rooms after defending ME so viciously InuYashaaaa! BREAK SESSHY OFF! Hook him UP! Mmmmm!!!

schedule January 21, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Omg!!!! Omg!!! God's Kitty... You are just one of THEE BEST! KAMI!

schedule January 19, 2018 at 12:00 AM


Exquisite Delight... Kami I'm just in HEAVEN

schedule January 19, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Well... I'm having mixed feelings about this change. I'm kind of happy that Inuyasha has peace and is happy he gets to rest alone, at the same time I wish he would enjoy the pleasure his brother gives him... I wish he would crave him. I feel like a sicko for wanting him to want his brother... This is so complicated... ~+(- .-)+~

schedule January 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Oh KAMI-SAMA!!! Tis hotter than hot!!! Mmmm thank you!!! Thank YOU u

schedule January 16, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I'm sooo sorry, sorry to be lude enough to write my innermost thoughts out here like I am about to... but seriously if Sesshomaru THEE "Killing Perfection" looked at ME and finished my sentence with the words "...what, to Fuck you?"...

Oh mercy... I would've probably just creamed my chonies a.k.a. "nutted in my underwear" right where I stood! OMG!!! TOOOO.FK'n. HAWT!!!!💋🤩💦💗KAMI-SAMA!!!

schedule January 15, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Oooh man what a mind screw... I feel like such a hentai creep,jerk of an asshole for the excitement I felt now that Yasha is crying... Aww man   ごめんなさい。犬夜叉