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I am a big fan of this story, but a poor reviewer and I wanted to correct that. I greatly enjoy the way that you're playing within this universe you set up, the characters are so themselves, but still a little different because the background has changed. I think it makes sense for Sesshomaru and InuYasha to wait a while before they get back to the bedroom, there's still a lot of issues between them. But I will say that I really enjoyed Sesshy playing and training InuYasha, those were some beautifully written scenes. I look forward to more chapters and will try to be better about reviewing.

Oh man! Even I'm starting to feel the underlying frustration. But this angst is so good. I feel like such a masochist for liking this slow torture. Please update soon. I must see how these two obstinate people will move on from here.

Hopefully that 'little' accident will bring the brothers closer. I would love to see Totosai scolding Sesshoumaru. What a funny sight!

Very nicely done I loved the training session and all of it really as far as the lemons as much as I enjoy lemons and I really do especially between these two I also love a good story which means other things besides lemons things that lead up to lemons and make them more hot than just screwing around for the heck of it so I'll stick with you for there aren't a whole bunch of stories that I enjoy and I am enjoying yours. So stick with your guns or swords as this case may be and allow the story to progress on your time or it's time I should say and thank you for sharing it.

I love it! Like all of your stories, everything is so thorough and written with such care and attention to detail. I also like the spin on what happened in the series. I thought for a second Inu would actually cut off Sesshy's arm just like the series, but I like how he held back. It really shows his character.

As for the lemons, I think your writing is so fantastic and intriguing that you don't really need that in every chapter. The story is what's interesting. Don't get me wrong, I LOVE the sexy scenes, but I agree with you; the fabric of the story doesn't allow for that to happen right now. You could do a time skip type thing, if you wanted to get to that sooner, but like I said, I love your writing just the way it is :D

Keep writing, and I'll keep reading =]

I would love to see another lemon, but I am patient. I like the idea of the demon tree and Totosai being the Godfathers of both Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru. I will look forward to another chapter.

Oh this has gotten even better, IF that was possible!!! Great job!

God I loved it so sweet and moving and very in character for both actually I can't wait to see what happens next and I love the godfather tree totally cool to add him into this story especially with Inuyasha's connection to trees and nature. Thanks for sharing and I'll be waiting for the next update.

*Drools* This fic is so good...bravo. Bravo and furthermore, encore! I love that you updated so soon, please continue to entrall- Prismakakkerra

that was so fantastic. I just read the entire thing in about 5 hours. You're writing is so captivating and well thought out, it makes me want to go and re-write every one of my stories now =] There is so much thought and care put into every word, I'm jealous of your focus and creativity. Please don't stop writing