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for The Tale of the Demon Lord

by Arianawray

schedule June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
at least sesshy is showing some restraint...i guess thats a start. update soon please
schedule June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww Sesshoumaru makes me so proud, he's really showing a more mental level of maturity
person jdbbrz27
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well kind of a filler but not bad I guess I can't wait to see what else Sesshoumaru intends to do and how Inuyasha reacts maybe you could have a sort of lemon in a dream from one of them cause we could use a lemon really soon. I understand why you don't want to rush it but we could really use a little male on male action. I'll be waiting for the next update.
schedule June 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, that was cute, the ending. There's definitely improvement with Inu going into Sesshy's room at all ^^ I can't wait for the next chapter where I hope there will be more fuzzy feelings :D
person jdbbrz27
schedule June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really interesting gotta admit I love the interaction with Totosai he doesn't give an inch does he. And little sweet Inuyasha worried about his brother that was adorable. But I particulary loved Sesshoumaru's jealously how typical of him to act that way and in his warped mind to think that Inuyasha would sleep with the healer like Inuyasha is as warped as he is about domination and sex not sweet Inuyasha he's way to innocent for that and if Sesshoumaru wasn't so into only his own wants and needs he'd see that but then he wouldn't be the Iceman Sesshoumaru and it takes sweet Inuyasha to bring him out of his freezing shell to warm up to the world and to him and even to himself can't wait to see where you take this getting kind of excited to find out. I'll be waiting for the next update and thank you for sharing.
schedule June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very good work as always!!!
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
at least inu is man enough to say he is sorry to sessh. hope for a new update soon please
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Serves you right Sesshoumaru. Although if he plays it right he'll be in heaven when Inuyasha falls for him at long last. :) I'll be waiting for more chapters. :)
person satterb
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't know who's getting more antsy about wanting some loving going on...me or Sesshomaru! LOL Thanks for all your hard work on this story, I love it!
schedule June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
As much as i would love a yaoi update i am willing to wait for it because your story is too good to pass up. update soon please