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July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I check everyday to see if you had posted another chapter... that is to tell you how I love this story. and I'm not insinuating that you should update more in one week! Just do it in your own time. more power to you and this beautiful story!
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July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved the ending with the clapsed hands that is so sweet and adorable it just made me want to go awe. The rest was kind of you know just filler but I can't wait to see your next update and to meet Sessh's mommy tha ought to be interesting.
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July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
One of the best chapters yet. I really liked the dept of emotion and thoughtfulness Inuyasha showed at the end.
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July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was lovely I loved how you had Sesshoumaru help the villagers especially the 50 year tax thing now that was an inspiration marvelous. And the bit with Bokensu'O was wonderful especially about the spiratual needle and half demon thread wow I almost cried and laughed at the same time. Although I believe the half demon thread has already been woven tightly into the hole of Sesshoumaru and that it isn't going to become unraveled for a long time if ever. God I love this story and then the bit about the age and how one minute he feels old and the next like a kid how extremely typical of a teenager or even a young adult hell sometimes of anyone at any age so insightful of you wow I'm impressed and I can not wait for your next installment. Could you let me know my email is the same as on FF it's brzachman@yahoo.com
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July 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
the next day should be a good day.
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July 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this line in your story.
"Inuyasha shivered from the sensations that the dream had left him with, but as he closed his eyes again, he could not say for certain if that physical response to his night vision was a shudder of fear, or a tremor of desire."
It would be wonderful if Inuyasha was able to desire his brother than to fight the feelings he has. After all, it would not be so unusual since the two of them shared the same bed to begin with and Sesshoumaru is certainly not going to object if Inuyasha claimed his want for another sexual interlude. Or they could just have a nice make out session. That would be good too.
"Inuyasha shivered from the sensations that the dream had left him with, but as he closed his eyes again, he could not say for certain if that physical response to his night vision was a shudder of fear, or a tremor of desire."
It would be wonderful if Inuyasha was able to desire his brother than to fight the feelings he has. After all, it would not be so unusual since the two of them shared the same bed to begin with and Sesshoumaru is certainly not going to object if Inuyasha claimed his want for another sexual interlude. Or they could just have a nice make out session. That would be good too.
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July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I adore this fanfic. I've been following it since chapter 1. You keep everything very believable and I check almost everyday to see if you've updated. Keep up the amazing work and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
glad he got to be with his friends and hope inu goes back with his brother. hope to see an update soon please
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July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Now that was an awesome chapter I loved it very cool. I love Inuyasha's connection to the trees and nature because it would be so obvious and so many writers overlook that connection. And when he gave the sacred tree the leaf I almost cried it was so touching. I love how you put his paticipation in the town and community totally cool and so nicely written. And then at the end with the dream and his connection with Sesshoumaru perfect for someone just starting to have and open his feelings for someone else. This was so well thought up and written thank you so much for sharing and I can not wait for the next update. I'm assuming Sesshoumaru will be arriving and I can't wait to see what happens especially after Inuyasha new awareness.
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June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that was a very deep one a day in the life of sessy. update soon. it's so good.