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July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
eeeeeeeee!!! It just keeps getting cuter and cuter!! I LOVED the pillow fight, that was absolutely priceless. And I actually like the lack of lemons. Don't get me wrong, I love sexy time, especially with these two, but the lack of lemon keeps me coming back for more and makes the tiny parts that are slightly erotic even more tantalizing. I can't wait for more!
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July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't believe I haven't read this story before!! Just came across it now and quite liked it....Inuyasha is very much in character but Sesshoumaru seemes a little bit OC....but it's a good story...will Naraku try to drive a wedge between the brothers?? can't wait for an update!
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July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
They had reached the top of the staircase leading up to their bedrooms. Sesshomaru paused, looked at Inuyasha, and said: "I don't believe I will ever merit unqualified praise from you, but I'm working on it."
I can feel Seshoumarru there!
Godspeed!
I can feel Seshoumarru there!
Godspeed!
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July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was adorable and I liked it alot the playfulness and fun with small hints of something more just like most relationships actually start. I noticed that most writers don't actually take the time to develop a relationship so this is really cool and I like it. Can't wait to see how nasty Naraku fits in this so I'll be waiting for the next update and really good job on this chapter and of course the whole story. Thank you.
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July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Inuyasha was so ADORABLE in this chapter. I want to keep him. Provided that Sesshoumaru comes with the package. Hang in there Sesshoumaru you'll get your invite soon enough. And it will make it that much sweeter because you will have earned it. I hope Naraku doesn't traumatize Natsumi again or try to hurt InuYasha.
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July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LoL aww Sesshoumaru. He'll be invted, not right now but he will be XD optimism is key!!
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July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another amazing chapter. In all honesty I don't mind the slow plot development. Your story is more believable. You're showing how Inuyasha is changing Sesshoumaru into a better person and in turn Inuyasha is learning how to grow up in a world he is new to. I adore this story and I look for updates like everyday. Keep up the awesome work. Because when you do get to the lemon it will be well worth the wait.
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July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great character development. We never see Inuyasha at his age in the anime. I also like the fact you have a plot, but I would not disagree with a little more sexual content. :)
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July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Must...read...MORE!
Update soon!
Update soon!
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July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWW! Nuff said!