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February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yeah - Miroku and Inuyasha - my favorite pairing for Inuyasha! I love how you've started the story and am looking forward to reading more. You might want to be sure you check for typos and formatting before posting. There were enough typos to distract me a bit from the story. It's obvious you are a good writer and it's just fast typing causing the issues. I love the story structure and the beginning of the plot. I also like the dialogue you've used too. I'd like a bit more build up between the characters although maybe that's just because there aren't enough good Miroku/Inuyasha stories and I want it to last ; ) So happy that Inu has kissed him already. I think this will be a really good story. Can't wait for the next chapter!!