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Stories like "Uke" and "The Last Pure Human" have utterly spoiled me. I expect so much from you now. Your writing style is consistent. The tone of your stories is light and playful. Always an enjoyable read. The elephant thing? Clever. Weird where you find your inspiration. My only complaint is the length of the chapters. I'm not sure why you didn't just combine several. I do salute you for finishing a story. I can't wait to see how it ends. Good job, Twisted.

OMG I didn't even know you were writing this story. so good and funny loved it. Your mind is coming up with something are you going to make the monk preggers lol? will Sesshomaru come into the picture and help or is it too late? oh update please can't wait to read another chapter.

Your evil and I love it. i feel bad for Miroku that everyone knows now but its cool. I'm getting the feeling that Inuyasha has feelings for Miroku now i just hope Miroku has them too. I do wonder how will Miroku get pregnant but we will have to see I guess. Thanks for the two chapter update!

first and foremost: thanks for posting so many chapters at once+get well soon! as for the chapters, i like inu´s jealousy+overprotectiveness, and that miroku is starting to like this too! hell, he´s even thinking about having sex with inu - a bit less often, a bit less violently - and likes the idea...tricking inu into believing he´s got miroku knocked up can only work for a short time if at all...just long enough for miroku to fully realize how much he misses inus 'nightly attention' LOL now looking at your warnings which are including mpreg i´m already looking forward to everyones(!) reaction to miroku actually getting pregnant...i can SO see kouga´s jaw hitting the floor at inu doing the impossible!!

lmao XD And a possible reason is revealed. X3 And a possible solution! Now, all we have to do is wait and see if Sango's idea works, or not. ..... lol

I can't wait to see that. XD

lolz~~~ miroku will not out run inuyasha.. but maybe, just maybe... haha~~~~~~

Oh, jealousy. Miroku is so in for it. (pun intended) :3

Oooh, a two chapter present^_^! You treat your readers so nice. You do enjoy torturing poor Miroku. Another all night session and then up against a tree?! He's not going to be walking for a long while so he'd better get use to InuYasha carrying him. I feel bad for InuYasha though. He's feels so dang guilty about something he can't control. Can hardly wait to see what's the "stupid" idea he has about why this is happening.
The chapter was not bleh,it was necessary to move the story along and that's never bleh. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Miroku being who he is, everyone should have realized he would rationalize the sex. This is the same man who ask every woman he meets to bear his children. He did that sort of betting on the law of averages, eventually one of them was going to say yes.

Only with Inuyasha he bit off more than he could chew. Our horny monk is plagued by a horny demon with horny demon stamina. :3

I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for the update.

oo I wonder what it is that's causing Miroku all of this. Can't wait to find out why. Also I wonder whats going to happen at kouga's xD I hope nothing bad will happen when they get there.