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for Interest

by szaugg

person Djargo
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh,Miroku is so hilarious! You would think,as a guy,that the second thought after "I'm what!?" would be "How in the hell is the baby suppose come out!?" Being that oblivious is quite the trick. Absolutely loving the story. Looking forward to seeing how you wrap this up.
person Laiko
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That is so sweet, my teeth ache. Seriously though, I loved Inuyasha's reactions. Hey, on Miroku's behalf – it's hard to think of the lump that makes you pee every thirty minutes, your feet swell a size or two in shoes, your back ache like you spend each night lifting 100 pounds when you can barely wobble to the can as a baby - until it starts to push back. You captured it. Sweet.
person Bluesake
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful as usual! Love the fast updates.
person Peya Luna
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO!! if i were miroku, i´d rather be concerned about WHERE it will come out XD and i love that he´s finally getting 'motherly' feelings for the little one...and the village-women reaction was absolutely priceless!
person Laiko
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You don't write mpreg. I really thought this was some elaborate joke. This makes "Interest" funny as hell. Only three chapters left? When does InuYasha get to enjoy Miroku instead of just his youkai? Kind of feel bad for the guy. Everyone should get to enjoy the little monk.
person Peya Luna
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i love him fainting at the news but even more his thought in the previous chapter about raising a kid with inu - mommy miroku! he doesn´t even realize that he´s developing motherly+nesting instincts...btw, i sure hope that inu hasn´t stolen the stuff he brings, it could cause them trouble - though where should he has the money to buy it from? and speaking of inu, now that he knows its real he surely will protect miroku even more...and maybe when talking about raising THEIR child together miroku will finally come clean about his feelings...
person Bluesake
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah yes he is preggy! : D Can't wait for the last 3 chapter
person Daoryn
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haha, omg, that was brilliant!
Poor Miroku, I kind of feel for him. Must be a shock... (not so much to Inu heheee)
Can't wait for the rest.
I like how Miroku feels nice and loved and cared for and equally afraid of the end of that...
Well can't wait for the next chapter!
person kaylez24
schedule March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the 'reveal' were Miroku finally finds out he's expecting. LMAO
schedule March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
XD Poor Miroku! XD But he won't be hungry for a long time to come. XD