rate_review Reviews

this was great.

I'm guessing that is your first time every writing a lemon. It wasn't bad but there is a problem with it. You rushed threw it. When most readers like myself read a lemon they like to put their self into one of the main characters places. I can help you write better lemons if you like. I may be 19 soon to be 20 but I have been writing lemons since I was 14. I only have one story posted because all my stories are on paper. If you want to read my lemon to get some ideas here is the link… http://inu.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600096101

If you would like more help with lemons you can e-mail me at Death_Note_1933@yahoo.com

Blackrose

This was cute . And your lemon was good for a first time lemon My self I haven't written one yet Lemon I mean ;-) I do not think I would make any since. I look forward to more of your work. I do have one Sesh and kags story but no lemon... See yah.