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for Strength

by ajj77sunhawk

person Niote
schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Why do I get the feeling that Inuyasha's gonna die??? No! No! No! No more tragedies!!! ARGH!
schedule January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL more more more I sooooo love this story.........I can't wait to see the kids and how many they are going to have and they are just being sooo sweet to each other and yussha I'm proud that he is learning to share his papa. So keep up with the great stories.........and I can't wait to read more.
schedule January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
that was good. the love that boy of there's. all you need now is for sessy to do some standing up for family in some way so the kids can see the different in him, and inu heart my mend some more before the birth.
person jdbbrz27
schedule January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh it worked it worked beautifully. If you had Sessh act that way to anyone else well then he would have been out of character but acting that way for the one he loved above all else no that would be totally in character. And Yuusha is adorable he wouldn't be the first to teach their parent how to be a good partner I've know of a few who have done it for their parents and what made it sweeter is with how selfish and spoiled little Yuusha is and he is just like Sessh in that respect selfish and spoiled above all else he can see how much his papa needs his other father and he puts that ahead of what he wants that's how you can tell that he was brought up by Inuyasha and not the old Sesshomaru although I would hate to see it if Inuyasha were to die because that would be so horrible all around and for everyone I'm not sure I would be able to recover if that were to happen and I'm just reading it let alone the charecters they more than likely would never recover. Can't wait to see what happens next I also approve as much as I like survive and I do I adore strength and can't wait to read all of it although it will be bittersweet knowing it's done but then I will have the new one to adore after that right.
person Vyper
schedule January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It was sweet that Yuusha wanted to give his Papa and Father time to themselves although he is an onery little bugger. I think Yuusha takes after Sesshoumaru more than Inuyasha which is probably why they are constantly in conflict with one another.
person T'Amara
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, things progress! The entire castle now knows that dear Lord Inu is not just pregnant but seriously ill and are watching/aiding/abetting. I love the comment that although Inu makes jokes about it, Sess isn't considered jovial so he doesn't have to laugh, and he sends poor Wolf-boy away on errands so HE doesn't have to pretend to. AND Sess has admitted, in FRONT OF WITNESSES (his mother no less!) that Inu isn't just his baby mama but the love of his life. I love the phrasing, "I mated you for me." Catches it nicely. And Sess, being very patient, is NOT expecting a grand return pronouncement, at least not at this time.

And I hope the Gods help, he DID after all give his remaining strength to the adorable God-Baby. STRENGTH by the way, is SUCH an appropriat title. Each chapter shows a different kind. YOU ROCK!

Happiest of New Years,
T'Amara, petting her own lovely inu
schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I Love This Blinking story please keep it coming I love shessy and the new baby is soooooo kawaii love it......there is just so much to love of course we all are wondering how they will save inuyasha and I hope Yuusha learns to get along with his dad and not be so challenging toward him......ok can't wait for more holding my breath till you add more chappies.
person Vyper
schedule December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am glad Sesshoumaru finally told Inuyasha how much he loves him. The two of them are so perfect together in this story I just hope Inuyasha lives since it would be terrible if he died. Too many people love Inuyasha to allow him to die.
person dyami
schedule December 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Never expected a heart felt declaration of love from Sesshomaru to Inuyasha, blew me away. That should mean so much to Inu, sure mini Sessy Jr will agree.
person jdbbrz27
schedule December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god that totally rocked as well. I am so honored that you used that I have got to tell my friend about that she will so laugh it'll make a great coffee conversation and you wrote it beautifully I could just imagine Sesshy's face ha ha I laughed so hard and don't worry I'm not scared of big ole Sesshy I'll just get Inuyasha to keep him in line and if he's not up to it then I'll tell on him to his mommy so there Sesshy Sweety. I loved this chapter and needed that bit of levity at the end I was crying so much throughout most of it. It was written so beautifully I loved how Sesshy finally told Inuyasha exactly where he stood as far as Sesshy was concerned and I loved it. Cause now he knows that in no uncertain terms that he Inuyasha stands on top in Sesshy's heart and mind and soul even above Sesshomaru himself and I so loved that. I also loved how protective and diligent everyone in the castle and beyond got of sweet little Inuyasha and sometimes he needs in fact usually he needs it to protect himself from himself. How is it that you can always make your stories get better and better even when I can't possibly see how they could get any better. And now that the ladies can finally see how bad off Inuyasha is I'm wondering if Sessh is giving all he can of his energy to Inuyasha or is it that Inuyasha is subconsciesly not taking all that Sessh has to give because he's so use to giving and not taking for himself I'm wondering if he subconsciesly is giving it to the pups instead of himself without realizing it or if there is another reason why this pregnancy is so hard on him any way I'll be waiting and I hope you had an awesome Christmas and will have a great New Year.

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