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by ajj77sunhawk

person Vyper
schedule January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope Yuusha and Sesshoumaru would start acting like Father and son rather then like enemies. Yuusha has quite the attitude around his Father and it is kind of sad since Inuyasha really needs his pups to get along with their Father so he can heal properly without worrying so much. I believe Sesshoumaru can save Inuyasha and I hope that sometime soon Inuyasha will get better. By the way, great chapter.
person jdbbrz27
schedule January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yep no more balconies for sweet Inuyasha poor thing just gets more and more things taken away from him. I loved the throw and bounce Naoya game totally hilarious I was laughing throughout it and imagining it in my mind. I also loved how protective and well sensual the moko moko is with Inuyasha and it does make sense I mean it is a part of Sessh and if Sessh could he would always want to be there to protect and well molest out sweet young Inu now wouldn't he. And Yuusha telling the assistants to cry now that was classic and brilliant on his and well our amazing writers part I mean in the anime and manga Inuyasha has always been one to give in to a females tears like most males I know so it's only natural to result to sneaky tears if it will help protect and get our little hanyou to admit when somethings wrong and what it is absolutely perfect and I loved it. And the fact that all the kids are so in tuned with Yuusha and their papa that when Yuusha was no longer paying attention put a stop to the throw the baby god arounds and little sweet Yuusha went to save his papa and that Daddy Sessh saved both due to Yuusha's howl of distress how do you write these stories so damned fantastic anyway god if I only had a sliver of your talent. Oh I found out that this story which I nominated at Inuyasha fanguild has been seconded in the yaoi and drama so hopefully if people have taste you'll win I've read the others and they don't compare to yours I hope you don't mind that I nominated you if you do then please tell me at my email brzachman@yahoo.com
schedule January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ya think no more balconies??? Well I hope you have something planned for Inuyasha so that he won't have to watch his family from afar.
schedule January 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ugh, I find this story tantalizingly delicious and mutually frustrating! It's so good it makes me greedy for MORE!!! >.< -nomage on the epic story- Keep up the good work please and thank you.
person varjo
schedule January 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm thinking I'm gonna gut you like a fish if you really plan of killing Yasha and making him a bloody star... Thanks for the update though.
person wantstobeanonymous
schedule January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i do not like where this is going. and the angst is on high, especially after last chhapter. it saddens me. i demand that inuyasha and sesshoumaru tell those elder gods to blow it and their stars up where the sun dont shine and inuyasha can contiue to live with sesshoumaru...its only fair.
please....*puppy dog eyes*

ill give you cookies....
schedule January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is not bad.
person kale
schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
If I'm being pessimistic. I gonna say Inu dies, becomes a star. And Sess goes insane.

But I'm really hoping that doesn't happen.
person jdbbrz27
schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay you made me cry again how do you do that oh I know I didn't ask but I nominated you for a Inuyasha fanguild award in a few catergories I hope you don't mind and in the yaoi category so far you've been seconded and the seconding just started isn't that awesome. I hope this story wins because this story is awesome. Now for this chappie a little bit of sweetness mixed with heartbreaking angst in it's own way this story is an example on how people should look at life. As for being a star what a load of well you know a star indeed to look over the family and not to be a part of it really and just appear once in awhile why so those who loved you can know what they miss so much that's just crap and besides one star out of billions phew only a god would think that's a big deal not someone who has known love, care, warmth, sweetness or even the other side hate, pain, sadness, cruelty who would want to spend eternity in the coldness of space never to feel again I think personally I would rather die and become nothing instead of looking and yearning never to touch or feel or interact at all that would be the ultimate pain I think I don't think I would ever want it not for me or those that I love it kind of cheapens the life they lived and the people who loved them and always will in their hearts and minds for all time anyway don't worry I'm off my bandwagen please don't turn sweet loving passionate fiery Inuyasha into a star surrounded by cold space. He's been alone to much in his young life as it is.
person Vyper
schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Inuyasha turns into a star, huh, I always thought he was more like a comet. Anyway, cool. Let's just hope he doesn't die. That would be best cause even if life sucks being dead doesn't help anyone especially a stubborn Inuyasha.