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Sweetie I don't know if u r aware of this, but that piece of trash just posted this story and called it Power! This witch is truly out of pocket! I swear something really needs 2 b done about her ass!

Hi I love your stories but on ff.net this author has stolen your story LazyBones89 and the name is called power. I just wanted to let you know


ladytokyo aka Shivonne

Instinct told ME to check for an update,and holymoley, the dream the Elder Gods sent everybody was BONECHILLING, and they all had it for multiple nights??? It would make anyone scared to death and practically crazed with it. But I LOVE the way they keep it from the children and Inu, and the confrontation with the Elders, led by our little Naoya, was deligthful! That's one heck of a baby God, but hey, our Hanyou are all TOUGH. And I was pleased the gods left Inu with enough youkai to deal at least with the pulses... Also totally, TOTALLY pleased with the way the entire Castle reacts, one solid, strong, loving bunch of folks. They're practically worthy of Inuyasha himself... THEN YOU ENDED THE CHAPTER AS THE BIRTH STARTS.

AAAAAAAAACKKKKK

Although Valentine's Day WOULD be a lovely time to read of a successful, safe birthing.

Much love and SPEED to your writing,
T'Amara

Wow what an emotional roller coaster at first I was so upset when I thought the dream was real although really great job on writing there. And then the confrontation between the baby god and his siblings and the 3 grown gods again marvelous indeed and if they could have helped Inuyasha by giving him a touch of youki than the jerks should have done so before then and the participation of all the other youki joining together to protect our sweet Inuyasha I cried like a baby. But now well now I want Inuyasha to have his puppies and to finally be healthy and well and for Sessh to give Inuyasha everything he needs for it please your killing me here and I love this story and your amazing imagination thank you.

that was not funny at all. what r u trying to do kill people with that opening. than the endding. man if i could fine you i would yell like inu tell u updated. soory. update soon. please and thank you. that was cute with the kids and all. nicely done.

I hope Inuyasha lives through this birth. Inuyasha is so strong and his children not to mention Sesshoumaru would be so lost without him.

You fucking scared the shit out of me! Damn it! After I realized it was a dream/vision, then I calmed down. I find it interesting that the gods don't actually know the future, and like that a lot. I really liked this chapter, even though it scared the hell out of me in the beginning of this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next!!! Please update soon! I really want to know if Inuyasha and the infants will be okay. I appreciate the long chapter but I know that I am far too impatient for my own good, thusly wanting to read more. However, please update soon! I really want to see what happens. This story sucks the reader in and doesn't let go. Sometimes I've thought of messaging you to make sure you're still alive. I wish you luck on the next chapter. Sorry for rambling!

ok ok ok yes. loved it. will done. now we can have the pups and end the story. for a new one. lol lol lol

Gee, I wonder how he guessed so acurately... No balconies. I'm wondering why Shess doesn't have in complete bedrest yet...

Thank you for the update.

I love this somewhat light-hearted chapter filled with Yuusha and Naoya goodness. The interaction between all the children made me giggle a little. While I'm not on pins and needles like poor Sess is right now, I'm worried and concerned about Inuyasha and the upcoming birth. I also wonder what part Naoya might play in it?

Thanks for writing for us!