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for Strength

by ajj77sunhawk

person kagomebabygirl
schedule February 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i love this story, but i'll like you to know that an author from fanfiction.net in stealing stories and yours is one of them. their name is LazyBones89.
person varjo
schedule February 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the new chapter, and yes Snowfall was absolutely right, readers love details. I've liked this story from the beginning and I hope you'll consider writing some sort of sequel about Inus and Sesshys life together after the birth of the second litter.
schedule February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG i love this story....my vote is the longer and more indepth you make it is wonderful.....MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE I really don't want this to end......I want to see them live and the children grow up into teenagers! and all the details in between. One detsil that I would LOVE for you to write is Yuusha and Sess during teen years.........you know when hes ready to be a man and no one can tell him what to do.....I mean we have seen Yuusha get his ass beat once.....but whats going to happen when Sess has had enough and I mean really enough.......and even Kishi.....if he pulls one to many practical jokes!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE reconsider ending this story...there is just so much to write about!!!!!! Especially looking forward!!!!!!!
person Vyper
schedule February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The last chapter is so romantic and sad. Sesshoumaru declaired his undying love to his Inuyasha. It is so beautiful the way they love one another. I just hope Inuyasha will be ok.
person Nesha85
schedule February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I hope Inuyasha lives. I also want Sessy to stop fighting with his son, but it is sooo funny.
schedule February 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love your detail!!! This chapter was sooo good!! I can't believe you left us hanging once again though XD. Please hurry with the next installment!
person Elvira
schedule February 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! The wiggiling wonder? :O Hehehe.
schedule February 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Man this is awesome I love this story Inu finally had the pups can't wait to see how shessy will save him keep you the awesome writing.......
person Caitriona
schedule February 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a cliffie! Two probably adorable pups just waiting on their papa to love them and what does he do? Passes out! You can't stop here. Please!!

On a more calm and rational note, this was a lovely chapter. I found myself stopping to try to think of what the 30 things he wasn't supposed to do were -- and giggling to myself over a number of them. I found myself trying to think of the 7 he was supposed to do - and hoping that loving and accepting the love of Sessy was one of the biggies. I enjoyed the detail and thorougness of the chapter, and you know I love the concept behind your version of male birthing.

Nice stuff and I'm patiently waiting on an update, even though I check almost every other day, just in case. :D
person wizzy891
schedule February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Some Person Hadd Stoled Your Story & Called It Their Ownn...LazyBone Somethinq.