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for Strength

by ajj77sunhawk

person Rem-chan
schedule January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's a very good start and the plot would likely turn out very good with your style of writing... Simply said: Keep going! :)
person Pam
schedule January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i liked the story so far i hope you continue it, i would to know what happened and whats going to happen i think you should continue it , i would definitly read it.
person Princess Sin
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
should you continue? of course you should! i want to know what
inuyasha had to do to save sesshomaru. this was quite the
cliffhanger. and the way inuyasha spoke to myoga was chilling.
i hope you have another chapter and is able to put it up tongight
or right now. it doesn't matter which one. the suspense is killing me.
person emiria_rose
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yes definetly. inuyasha always gets the short end of the stick. plz tell me this will get better eventually cause with seeshou being who he is i have a feeling it's going to be a very rough road.
person seshoumaruprincess515
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow wonderful so far, you should continue and give some detail on what occured between the brothers when Inu went after Sess
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Continue on indeed! I'd love to read more of this awesome fic!
person mrk33
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am loving it already, and the agnst, suspense, and intrigue....wonderful.
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hah, you dare to ask if you should continue?!
DUH!!! OF COURSE YOU HAVE TOO!!!!!!
I love this story, I want to know exactly what happened and if you don't continue i'm going to get very angry at you!

so...um...hope that made my opinion clear...continue please? (puppy eyes) =3
person Kit
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh please do contine! its lovely! thank you! please update soon
person midnightsweet
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
nice start. will you till us what happen

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