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January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it. You have caught my attention and i am on pins and needles waiting for the next Chapter. Please don't wait to long.
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January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
damnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i don't blame inuyasha i would leave to he did all the hard work and everybody is complain including bitchass kagome
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January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
To submit over and over was very hard, for Inuyashas' character. You did not need to detail the rape, since,
I am sure more will be revealed down the road, and seems unimportant within the story. True to form the way
he is reacting towards the others who betrayed knowingly (knew about his life, yet, demanded something while
being ignorant of demon culture), betrayed him. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
I am sure more will be revealed down the road, and seems unimportant within the story. True to form the way
he is reacting towards the others who betrayed knowingly (knew about his life, yet, demanded something while
being ignorant of demon culture), betrayed him. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
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January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG, where's the next chapter?
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January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was intense and so majorly just wow. God I have to know what he intends to do about his pregnancy and the pups jeez that poor sweet thing. So many questions where will he go what will he do will Sesshamaru find out and if so then what will the humans find out and then what. Can poor Inuyasha deal with his memories and the pain from them who can he get to help him especially now. Wow I love this story it is totally awesome. And how you wrote the submission was fine it gave everyone an idea of what went on personally I do like a little more detail and feelings but what you wrote was just fine besides you are right they were brutal rapes and even if someone does find pleasure if it is done against their will then it is still rape besides unless the mind and body agree then any physical reaction good or bad is just that a physical reaction and doesn't necessarily mean said person enjoyed it just that their body was forced to react to it but anyway I am enjoying your story very much and I hope to see an update soon thank you for sharing with us.
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January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon because I absolutely love it! I love how it is InuYasha against pretty much everyone else. That sounds really bad...but I like how that sets this apart from other more common plot lines. Thank you for posting this fic.
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January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
glad you continued. are you going to have the humans find out or are they completely cut from the picture? also has inuyasha lost all familial attachments to shippo as well. can't wait til next time. hope it gets better. ciao!
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January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Again you let her off easy. I know that is not his way, but I would have done something to her to get her to see what it cost (some of it) to save Sesshoumaru, but i know that is not part of the story now. From what I got out of the scene between Inu and Sess he was talking more about himself than to Inu. I feel that he is trying to come to grips with the fact that his brother saved him instead of letting him die. That he knew Inu paid a price he never could to save his only family member. To me he saw his father Inu more than ever and he is more angry with himself than his brother. Sesshoumaru does not lose control and doesn't need to be saved or protected. Inuyasha has seen him at his worse and took everything without lifting a finger to fight back. Showed him what it means to care about family whether you like them or not. Showed him,Sesshoumaru the lord of the west what it meant to be a demon from Inuyasha a hanyou. It left a bad taste in his mouth. If I'm going too deep let me know.
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January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you sooooo need to continue it sooo good can't wait for the next part
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January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
If it were me I would let them know just what it took for him to save his brother. I would give graphic details of what happened just so that would feel just as bad if not worse than I did. It may only be mental anguish, but they wouldn't be able to sleep at night peacefully for awhile. Kagome should be made to listen to it knowing that if he ever thought about being with her, she just blew her chance. No amount of sacrifice in any of their lives is more than what he's had to pay for the sake of their selfishness.