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can you beat all of them??? This story is great and I look forward to reading more

Using Kouga to inform "The Pack" about Inu Yokai submission to a raving mad Alpha was an excellent choice. Keade's response to the Miko fit exposing the group's lack of understanding and compassion. I loved how Kouga brought to their attention Inuyasha marking them with his scent as protection and love. Awaiting the next chapter.

damn! damn! damnnnn!!!! james!!!!!!!!!

Man Kagome is a nasty bitch in this story! And most of the gang are total traitors! They may give poor Kaede a heartattack by taking away her puppy! If or when they find Inuyasha they better kiss his toes and beg for forgiviness! He may or may not forgive them, but at least they would have tried to make amends. Great chapter, look forward to the next one.

justice! finally they get an inkling of what they put inuyasha through. u never realize how precious something is until it is gone.

Interesting story full of drama, angst and a hint on humor (most stories with Jaken involved are humorous anyway:-) Look foward to future chapters!!!

The descripton of what Seshoumaru did to Inuyasha was good enough. I don't need to know anything more. Now I'm curious how long will it take for Seshoumaru to meet Inuyasha again. Our Hanyou ran away... will the humans go after him and try to find him? I'm curious if Inuyasha would try once again speak with Sesshoumaru and what will the Lord of the West do when he finds out he will be a father. XD I can't wait for that part. XD But I will be patiently waiting for it to happen. XD Hmmm... how many pups? Inuyasha said "them" so it's more than one. Three? :) Two? :/
Good job with this chapter and I'm waiting for more!

Another well done chapter! Your style has begun to intrigue me more and more, you know, this is the first story I've ever reviewed and I've been reading on this site for 2-3 years now :) They way you write has a somewhat not-entirely-developed feel to it, but what is amazing is that you pull that off remarkably well x.x Even if it has that under-developed feel to it your style doesn't ruin the story at, all but allows you to tell of the character's doings without using too many details and yet still giving us the impression you're looking for.

Can't wait for another update, dear! -huggles- Poor Inuyasha :( And I did wonder why he was so strongly set to protect his abdomen when Sessh cornered him! The end of the chapter was so unexpected, at the beginning I was like "Aw, she won't turn it into an Mperg", but in the end I was ecstatic! XD Still am :P What a stress reliever when coming home! ;)

-Rem <3

Yeah keep going. I'd like to see where this goes plus what exactly this whole "submission" meant.

This is a very good start. You got me really curious what will happen next and what Inuyasha had to do to make Sesshoumaru sane again. :) Knowing Sesshoumaru (sane or not) he made it really hard for our hanyou, right? ;)
I'll be waiting for more! So please don't stop here!