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by ajj77sunhawk

person RugbyGod
schedule March 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love your portrayel (sp?) of death. Not something to be feared.
It was amazing how Sesshomaru went after InuYasha. This is one of my favorie stories!
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've spent the last few days reading your story, and I must say that it actually made me cry. I don't think I have ever read a fan fiction that made me cry. Kudos to you my friend. Definitely a story I could not stop reading.
person T'Amara
schedule March 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, these last two chapters.... first of all,congrats on the big award. YOU DESERVE IT, and frankly, who the hell won first? And of course first in the yaoi/yuri, dear to my heart.

And these two chapppies are wonderful. Second to the last, TRUE STRENGTH, dead romantic. Shades of St. Valentine's, but that Sess, when he's romantic, he's ROMANTIC. (and I might send a love letter to Snowfall for making you write it, girl knows what we your readers crave...)

And then death, complete with Death the Lover a la Misty. Beautiful, a bit worrisome in that Sess is really stretching HIS powers to go in after Inu, and I love Kouga bravely hugging those two dangerous women because, well, they NEED it. Nice one, wolfface! I DID notice that we don't know the gender of Pup #2, but they're alive and adorable, so meh....we can wait. More or less patiently (but then I want more of the story with Ban too).

Happy March!!!
T'Amara
schedule February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
that was too much. will done. all the awards you got for this story is will awarded. looking for to all your storys.
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
When I read the chapter and came to the part where Death showed itself I instantly thought of Vanyel. XD Funny enough I just reread Magic's Price the other day. ^-^
I'm happy everything went so well for the inu brothers. They deserve to be happy, especially Inuyasha. Thank you for this wonderful chapter.
person Vyper
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Death sounds like a beautiful being and so loving. I know people say they have courted death before, but this brings it to a new meaning. I look forward to your next chapter.
person Anon
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
your portrayal of death was amazing. Sneaky of Inuyasha to leave Sessy & the pups the way he did. I don't think he felt Sessy loved him enough to come after him in the after life. I do enjoy reading all the juicy little details also.
person mars'sythe
schedule February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i love your stories and i like that they have depth. i have been following the strength story for years and would love for you to take a few chapters to give it a fantastic ending. i also look forword to updates on your other stories about inuyasha.
schedule February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome. Please update soon. I love it and please keep up the terrific work.
person cheryldctx
schedule February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I luv this story and specifically this chapter.
I think wrapping it up in 2 chapters
would be just fine.