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just keeps getting better. is hana and shiori goin to stay with inuyasha after the birth? will he let them? til next time. ciao!

Oh so sad hope things get better more please!

that really was very angsty that i absolutely LOVED it! poor Inu but he will survive for about ten years. i hope all goes well for him. i seriously am hoping that sesshoumaru doesn't find out until the pups are like six and seven and are actually youkai. is it bad to hope for that? i think that scenario would just provide more angst, which i seem to be craving lately. awesome chapter as always. thank you soooo much for posting. i can't wait to read more.

Love your story!!! Please update soon!!

Bravo *claps* wonderfully, emotionally charged chapter. Soo, Inuyasha to sacrifice himself completely to ensure his pups survival.
The Water Goddess was a good addition, but I am sure the Goddesses involvement is not yet, finished. Keep up the good work, and I hope you are faring better in the health department.

Oh my gosh... I LOVE this story!

Okay why would anywone hate you that's just silly it is a heart wrenching story that I will admit but it hasn't made me cry yet so it's not to bad. In sacred trees you Inuyasha have his babies this way to which isn't so bad I guess at least you didn't make him into a female I hate that. I really hope it doesn't take ten years for Sesshoumaru to find out about his pups and fall in love with Inuyasha that could really drag on without any kind of fun for either of them. Although I would love to see Inuyasha courted especially by Sess and maybe a few others now that would be awesome like Kouga and some others just to give Sess some serious competition and make him win over Inuyasha anyway I still like your story it's pretty cool and interesting and can't wait for more updates can't wait for more on sacred trees to it should be so interesting to see how your imagination progresses both these stories.

it sounds like a lot. will have to see how this all plays out.

in my excitment in seeing that you had updated i got
mixed up with the water goddess' explanation to inuyasha
about what would happened to him in ten years. but after i
calmed down and re read it i now understand. i hope it
doesn't come to that because if you letting them age
in dogs years the pups would make one year in seven
years. i believe that's how dogs age something like
that. anyway, ten years still would not give inuyasha
enough time to do what he wants to do. unless he plans on
leaving for the mainlands and start building a sanctuary
for hanyous right now. it will take time for him to find
a good spot to start building and then once he finishes, he
will have to let it be known to hanyous or to human women who
are pregnant with demon babies or males who are pregnant for
a human male that there is a place for them to go to have their
baby in peace and safety.

personally i think it can be settled easy. since the water goddess'
lands is near the west. she should just go to sesshomaru and tell
him if he does not do the right thing and take inuyasha in and helping
him to safely birth the children that she will make the west
a barren wasteland without a drop of water anywhere in the western
lands. i think that will get him to pull his head out of his butt.
although you could let koga find him and he offers to become his mate.
but i'm sure inuyasha with his honor would not take him up on the
offer.

anyway, i can't wait for the next update. this is getting so
good.

Are you finished with his old pack or will you have Sesshoumaru talk to them about finding Inuyasha or whatever later? Basically the question is are you finished with them for this fic?