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for Strength

by ajj77sunhawk

person donnita
schedule January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMg OMg i wuz crying in this chapter!!!! Such good work! I lUv InuSess!!
person Stacy
schedule January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i am really excited for the next chapter! as for the content...never no anything that is half assed. if you are going to write child birth chapter then write it to the best of your ability, for your sake and the readers. you are a talented writer and i think that reguardless of the 'vote' outcome, always do your best. to sum it up.....shit or get of the pot!!! **he he he* i'm so funny
person debbie
schedule January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
grrr, I am so loving this, and yet frustrated! I'm not bitching, I'm just saying I EAGERLY await the next chapter. . . .and details are a good thing; I wanna hear your take on things
person nm1716
schedule January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying reading your story and can't wait to see what happens next. I thank bare bone birth is best, Just a little description. I hope inuyasha does not die and does find love. PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!!
person niyouko
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hey!~~~ some kouga-inuyasha doesn't sound but some sessinu is not bad either... now I'm indesicive hell wichever you choose will be awesome~~

For the vote a full detail chapter should be supercool (I read one about a birthing like this and it wasn't exactly ... well it was good but it could have been better..... I a full-detailed birth chapter does not win.... could you please please pleashe send me the fulldetail one to me please please please(kneeling and teary eyed)...PLEEEEAAAASEEEEE~~~~!!!?? *O*
person jdbbrz27
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying your story and you can do the birth any way you want just please don't completely skip over it. I feel so heartbroken for sweet Inuyasha having to go through so much alone and now having to have his babies alone it makes me want to cry no one should have to go through something that traumatic and difficult all by themselves but I am enjoying this story and I am thrilled that you update often so I don't end up forgeting everything I've read and have to reread just to catch up thank you so much and your doing a great job keep it up and I will continue to keep reading and enjoying.
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that you gave him a little break with everything that he about to go through.
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Inuyasha ran into some friends in the past to protect and got some cooked food and help out of the deal, nice! Great chapter, look forward to the next one:-)
person Princess Sin
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
first off, it's not that i want inuyasha with koga but it just that
if sesshomaru will not step up to bat and take care of his children
and help save inuyasha's life. then koga would be the next best
person. atleast inuyasha will still be alive to take care of his
children. but i do want inu and sess to be together. that is my first
and only wish.

you said that it would be years before the others run itno inuyasha
again. will it be around the time when he will find out if his
children are full blooded demons or hanyous? and if so will
sesshomaru finally realize what a complete ass he has been for
leaving? also, back when he attacked inuyasha, did sesshomaru
know that inuyasha was already pregnant with his children? was that
why he was trying to claw inuyasha in the stomach?

so, will he have all three boys. or two boys and a girl? i say
go for all three boys.

i am so looking forward to the next chapter and as for the
birthing. well, there can be gore but you don't have to
overdo it.
person kinhoshi76
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
damn what a shitty life inuyasha has just shitty