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well, it wasn't as gory as i thought it would be. well to me it
wasn't but that's okay. what made my skin crawl was when inuyasha
used that hot knife to seal the opening. i am still cringing just
thinking about it. but atleast he has given birth to his children.
and he will be happy. you didn't say what they were. i guess with
inuyasha being so bone weary tired you were going to wait until the
next chapter to let us know if he had three boys or two boys and a
girl. i'm still voting for three boys.

as for seshsomaru you should have made him suffer more. i wanted
to see him on the ground writhing in pain.

At first I kept thinking that Sesshoumaru is such a bastard because he was still an ass to InuYasha even after the whole affair and his brother saving him, but after that chapter I can't help but feel bad for him. He doesn't even realize why he feels like he is dying inside. Hopefully Everything works out in the end.

OMG i cant woit to fnd out what happens next, such a tease!!!

Wonderful! It was almost too much to read. I don't know how you wrote it. I couldn't do it. I'm looking forward to more.

I absoluely love your story, I usually do t review but if it gets chapters out faster I'm all for it. Can't wait for the next one.

The birth was perfect. You offered a taste of gore....just enough to paint a visual, but not an overwhelming image of Inuyashas' anguish. I wonder if Kouga heard Sesshomarus' howl? Looking forward to the next chapter.

Wow poor Inuyasha. Having to go through something like that all by himself. I'm glad his pups are ok and survived the birth. I see Sesshoumaru is still denying that anything happened with Inuyasha, but his youki is not allowing him to rest. GOOD!

Still loving your story, please continue to update!!

yeah every thing needs to mourn and cry tears of blood the sick bastard !!!!!!!! you know i rather don't like this sesshomaru in this story

I loved how you wrote Sesshy into the chapter. I didn't expect him to feel the birthing on such a level. Very well done! :3