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You described a very beautifu show, it seemed for me that I WAS here with them, I saw all the wonderful skills of the four fighters !
Thank you !

A french reader,
Bonjour de la France !
Merely Truth

Splendid chapter. Inuyasha snubbing The others was just a bonus. You kept Sesshomaru in character while, maintaining
his impassive, aloof, personality. Well done!

OMG I REAAAALLLYYY LOVE this story!!! I wait anxiously for it everyday, hopîng that a new chapter will be out. Please keep `em coming.

I absolutely LOVED this chapter. I'm pretty sure Sesshoumaru wasn't just swelling with pride for his children. "Something else" was probably getting a little swollen watching his beautiful brother in battle. He has his work cut out for him though. It's going to be a tough road to InuYasha's heart since he was such a bastard to the adorable hanyou.

Your plot is so very interesting.And the way u've built up the characters of the children is remarkable too.cant wait to read what happens next!!

Will Inuyasha tell them that he's dying? What a reaction whould that bring! XD Anyway, I'll be waiting for more. The pups are great! Every single one of them. :) And Sesshoumaru took Kaede with him! That's something new! That's for the chapter! It was great!

Great chapter! Awesome description of the mock battle. I loved it. Too bad that the purpose isn't so much entertainment as an attempt on Inuyasha's part to secure a place for the children with Sesshoumaru. Yuusha is definitely not going to like that. I hope that Inuyasha doesn't plan on abandoning them with Sesshoumaru, even if he does believe he's going to die, he should go with them. I just hope that Sesshoumaru falls in love with him and saves him. I'm so glad that Kaede got to see Inuyasha again, but I really dislike Kagome being there. Grrr. I'm glad that Inuyasha is giving Shippou a chance.

I didn't notice very many errors in this chapter. There might have been a missing period or two. So, it's obvious that you worked really hard. ^_^ Great job!

Yuusha will be the biggest problem for Inuyasha then the little one. The one thing that Inuyasha should have done, but couldn't was to make sure that the children would adore Sesshoumaru when he came to see them. I understand why it was not possible. Mee-chan just has to help bridge the gap on both sides. I know that's alot for a little girl to handle, but with both of her parents there wanting the best for all involved it should be a little easier.

Love, love, love this chapter. Great job with the fight demo (did the audience really think Inuyasha's son would try to kill him? Or that Inuyasha would let him? lol!) and with the dinner scene...just ignore the stupid humans. :) I especially like Inuyasha's treatment of Kaede (and Yuusha's recognizing her protected status) and his willingness to forgive Shippo if he behaves himself(and hopefully/maybe taking him back under Yasha's supervision in the future?).

Thanks for a great story. I can't even tell you how much I'm dying to know what's going to happen next! I check every day for updates. Take all the time you need, just keep the great stuff coming! ^_^ Even the angst...I'm ready.

It really made my day to read this chapter...twice...so far... Thanks again!

ahhhhh why whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy come on update darn it mannnnn I feel for shesshy I really do but I need more chapters moooooore ................holding on with baited breath so please update.