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by ajj77sunhawk

person Snowfall
schedule February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Eeegads! I hope that wasn't Kagome there at the end. Wonderful chapter. I liked Sesshoumaru's attitude, though I'm not sure that his reasoning is sound. If it is just honor, that's not good enough. I hope there's affection there as well. Can't wait to get rid of the humans. Seriously, they're an annoying bunch. ^_^ Thanks so much for updating. I've really been looking forward to it. ^_^
person Rae
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This (and the last one) is a good chapter, go Hana! Got the irritating humans out of the room and exposed some of Inuyasha's secrets...at least *all* humans aren't bad. :)

To answer the previous question, I don't feel like Sesshoumaru is in love w/Inuyasha yet, he was completely oblivious, then searching for the reasons for his disquiet and definitely possessive after meeting the pups, but at least his eyes are a little more open now...

What I'd like to see: More of the kids & interactions between them & Sesshoumaru...figure you've got that planned, though...hopefully. Also, I hope they take Shippo with them to the Western Lands. He's definitely going to listen to Inu from now on and loves him unreservedly, which could help heals some of Inu's emotional scarring...goodness only knows about his physical ones!

Still holding my breath...glad you update often, but this story is about to kill me. Perfect example of why I don't usually read *angst* or WIP...I get too emotionally involved in the story and then have to wait and wait and wait...hours feel like days...okay, maybe not that much, but please update soon. ;P
schedule February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That's tough as nails Inuyasha for ya. He's the one that's been though pure hell with the scars to prove it, yet he tried to console everyone present that he was alright! As for Hana, she put Sesshoumaru in his place! Knocked him off his high horse! Great chapter, look forward to the next one!!!
schedule February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. It holds so much strength and wisdom. Inuyasha is so strong, and loves his children so much. This story is really well written, better than most stories are. You can really see the commitment you as the author makes to it.

Please continue this story, I really want to see its end.
schedule February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
There is finally hope for InuYasha's survival. Sesshoumaru is willing to have more children with him. Now, all that is needed is for Sesshoumaru to truly love our darling hanyou. InuYasha must survive. Oh, and somehow I keep thinking the person who speaks at the end of the last chapter is Yuusha. I could picture him fuming over how his Papa is planning on making them all move to the West and starting a "family" with Sesshoumaru. What if the children are aware of what's going to happen to their Papa in the near future? Man, that would be tragic! Anyway, thank you for the update. I love it! Please update again soon!
person Elvira
schedule February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!!!!
schedule February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I want to strangle Sesshoumaru. He's such a dope. And here I thought he would change after all those years and especially after he found out about his pups. It was Yuusha at the end of the chapter, right? Or Kouga? Damn. I'll need to wait and see. XD
Great chapter!
schedule February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YOU CANT LEAVE IT HERE!!!! WTF!!! This just keeps getting better and better and you give us cliff hangers....so not fair. OMG could you totally focus on this story until it's done and then do the others because I even read sacred trees and while that has me enthralled as well....this one makes me the most anxious waiting for chapters ;)
person Yoyo
schedule February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!! I really love this story. It is one of those stories that you can't put down & you read it over & over. I really hope Sesshomaru get his act together, so he & InuYasha could be a really good family with their children. I would feel very heartbroken if those children lost their papa & they didn't like their father at all. I hope you update this quickly, so I can find out what happens.
person mrk33
schedule February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Way to go. So, who is our mystery shouter:

A. Kagome
B. Yuusha
C. Shiori (sp?)
D. Kouga

Thumbs up to your ending.