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Loved it!!!


The kids are so cute!

Update soon!

Yuusha can be so stern one minute and so playful and sweet the next. Their all so adorable,especially when they are playing together. Even shippo got to join the fun and Kirara invited herself. I bet she was thinking 'how can they forget about a cute kitty like me! Well, I guess I will have to remind them.':-) Great chapter, look forward to the next one!!!

WAAAAA! New chapter!!!! Thank god I've been waiting for this I swear you're stories are like a drug...if I don't get my fix I'm axiously waiting for the next chapter and even when it comes out I'm already excited for the next XD I just cant' win. Keep up the awesome work. I can't wait to see how Sessh is planning to win over his very emotionally fragile brother.

Sesshoumaru can be such a blind idiot. Hopefully he gets his head out of his ass soon. I am definitely loving Yuusha even more. I wonder how things will go once they reach the west. I have a feeling Yuusha will try to block Sesshoumaru's advances any way he can. Can't wait to read more!

Nice chapter. Sweet, though I wouldn't have let Kishi off so easily. Hm, I don't think Inu will say anything to Sess about being called a hanyou, but one of the kids might, or even Sess's mother could mention it. Inu has a name and Sess really needs to use it. ^_^ Thanks for updating so quickly!

Awww....I loved this chapter, it made me smile when I was feeling sad, thank you for that. On a side note, I like that you worked Shiori into this story, I really liked that bat girl from the series. :-)

Wo-ah! I just read chapter 1 through 14 in one day...I had to set your story aside for a few hours, but as soon as I fed the four mewling cats, tucked my daughter into bed, and put the garbage out, ZOOOOM, I was back! You have riveted my attention.

I found the psychology truly interesting and well thought out. I can tell you have some learning in the bio-psycho-social areas. And Inuyasha's character development was believable; he went from one manner to another without losing his constant core. It was easily relate-able.

Your writing is that style I like so much: more 'showing' than 'telling'. This is what makes a story really breathe like a living thing. Chapter 2 was especially well done with the angst (angst-whore here). You did an incredible job at 'showing' the torn Inuyasha's psyche and the corresponding behaviour of his submission.

I like explicit, but your brief phraseology was powerful: "Claws made a mockery of caresses as they dragged in long lines across Inuyasha chest, thighs and belly, leaving bloody tracks behind...(He) howled in pleasure over and over as he stamped his dominance over his brother." Now that is powerful writing without being explicit. SO, my disappointment was abated.

Your plot is fascinating. I've read a lot of mpreg Inuyasha, but your description of the process is by far the most intriguing and comprehensive. The intricacies of the essence of both fathers being needed for the life of the bearer, and intrinsically, the children was awesome. And you have kept your plot consistent and captivating; the apology of Sessy being about his behaviour AFTER really made me intrigued...it's true, it wasn't really rape, was it? But it was as dark--if not darker--than rape. Fascinating...I love the dark psychology exploration.

With chapter 14 arriving back at what Inuyasha truly needs, I'm very eager and excited to see how the arrogant, violent, and yet passionately loyal and capable of love-giving, Sesshoumaru will do!

PS. I'm glad you dumped Kagome...I can tell you despise her for the purposes of this fiction!

a slow, considering and slightly lecherous smile bloomed on Kouga's face

I was roflmao so hard at that line! I loved it! I've been reading this story and enjoying your updates. That chapter was very good, very visual, picturing everyone tense and on edge, and wham! Kouga goes lecherous! Absolutely perfect. Had to be one of my favorite scenes just because it threw a curveball in there to break things up a bit. Keep up the terrific work.

That was great! Read it straight through! Can't wait for more!

I loved that last chapter. Thank you for bringing Suijin to the rescue! ^_^ Kouga was funny and so in character. I enjoyed the byplay between him and Inuyasha. Sesshoumaru is acting as though he really cares. It's nice. And, I'm glad Inuyasha felt comfortable in Sesshoumaru's embrace. Quite an angsty chapter, but in a very good way. I can't wait to see how they will interact once they are in the Western Lands, and how the people there will react to Inuyasha. ^_^