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LOL!!!!! I LOVE IT! "Inuyasha shrugged, knew that the behavior on both sides would not be repeated, both the tall and small versions had made their arrogant points. " That has GOT TO BE my favorite line in this whole story ever!!!

They are both so bloody stubborn, and Yuusha completely taking over Yasha's lap, love it!! Sessh is being owned by a mini version of him! Shows that proud youkai right!!!

Loved it, so happy for the update, and Yasha doesn't even know it, but Sessh is slowly falling hard, and Yasha is doing the same XD loved it!

YAY!! New chapter!!! SOOOOOO goood! OMG I just LOVE Yusha, so cute, he's like a softer more loving version of Sessh....maybe how Sessh would have been had Inu been his whole bro or raised with him....

Anywho, if you like, since you seem to be tied up editing your other story you can email it to me and I will do it for you....then maybe you can just focus on this ;)

princess.of.anime@hotmail.com

I love the interaction between the "tall and small versions" of each other. Yuusha trying to make Sesshoumaru jealous while camping is priceless. I could totally picture the smug look on his face and Sesshoumaru's irritated scowl. This chapter is amazing!!! And I like the end where Yuusha is starting to think just a little bit better about Sesshoumaru. Thanks for the update.

Loved it!

Yuusha is so like him. No wonder they butt heads.

Update soon!

That was an excellent chapter. You seem to think of everything. Establishing a pecking order was a great idea. I'm glad that Inuyasha intervened and allowed that to happen. Oh my; Sesshoumaru's behavior was so...sensual. Heheh. Poor confused Inuyasha. Sesshoumaru is doing a great job so far. I loved his behavior when Yuusha challenged his behavior. That was great. Again, awesome chapter!

Just a little tip: I don't know if you already know this, but when you put numbers in a story, usually they should be spelled out instead of written numerically, at least, in most cases. ~_^

I'm loving it so far. You are a great writer. Inuyasha cant help but to feel and think the way he does. I hope sesshomaru will come to his senses before it's too late.

Yuusha is pretty much the perfect son in my humble opinion. I would love to have him as an older brother. LOL, Sesshoumaru jealous of his own child, who still has baby teeth. That almost random comment definitely made my day. Thanks for the update. I definitely need more soon.

Loved it!

So sad that InuYasha doesn't beleive.

Update soon!

Short and sweet. Inuyasha has burried himself underneath this mountain of his own repressed feelings, it's so sad. And slightly entertaining that Sesshomrau is jealous of his own son XD

I don't know if I'm happy or sad. The kids are adorable, but Inuyasha's view on himself breaks my heart. His previous 'so what if I'm Hanyou'-attitude is gone, I miss it. Sesshomaru really needs to bring back our hot headed Inuyasha, I miss him. And Kouga should be there too, just to radle Inuyasha's cage a bit :P . There are some mistakes, silly typos and what not, but it dosen't make the story less good, it just disturbes the reading a bit. I'm sorry that I wont be giving you some actual places where the mistakes are.
Please update soon :)