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OMG!!! I was soooo excited to see another chapter so soon!!! I wish you had nothing to do but write your heart out so that they could always come out this fast!! Alas, life gets in the way ne?? Thanks for the new chap!!

I knew Sesshouamru was faking. It was obvious he knew InuYasha wasn't ready and he had to come up with an excuse that InuYasha wouldn't take personally. I love him for it. Sorry if my last review was confusing. I reviewed when I was only half awake. I guess I shouldn't do that anymore. I did understand that the presence in the end was not Yuusha but the goddess. I just meant that I think it would be fun for Yuusha to interfere AGAIN on top of having the goddess threatening and irritating Sesshoumaru. The goddess' threat is definitely no joke. Sesshoumaru would lose his whole family if InuYasha died. I personally would hate my father if he ever did that to my mother (bearer). Thank you for this quick chap. It is exactly what I needed as a pick-me-up going into finals week. Can't wait to read more.

Thanks for the great chapter & so soon, keep it up. I can see that Sesshomaru is finally learning how to be a great person in the inside & that family is what all it matters to him & everyone that is involved around him, good for him. I think Sesshomaru & InuYasha has suffered enough in the past & in the present, they deserved to be happy. It would be really awesome to see them happy for once. Update again soon.

Well, Maru does need to be taken down a few pegs. He's getting there faster than I'd expected. I have a feeling a lot of it will be through the pups. Yasha seeing him with them. The true test would be the next group of pups..if they're hanyou and Maru treats them with equal love and protectiveness.

Even short, the chappy is good!

As always you have one upped yourself again to more new heights of goodness. And no I never thought as Inuyasha did I was well aware that Sesshoumaru was faking you don't get that strong by being tired after a mere orgasm even if it was a powerful one. He has to much control for that but he would want Inuyasha to rest because he would realize how much more it would take out of him for he has gone through so much more than Sesshoumaru and Sessh would realize that I mean he may be a bit cold but he's not stupid. And I love the Goddess she is awesome and for her to come up with that threat it's something I would do if I were her. For his own children would never forgive them if they found out and who would blame them and I am thrilled that she will always be keeping a strong and critical eye on Sesshoumaru someone should have done that long ago. God I love this story and your imagination can I borrow your imagination sometime yeah right like I could but at least you are willing to share some of it so thank you and I'll be waiting anxiously for the next update.

well of course i knew sesshomaru was lying when he said he
was tired. i mean he didn't really do anything really
strenous to be tired. but if it made inuyasha happy
to believe that he had more stamia than sesshomaru so
be it. anyway, two chapters wow you are on a roll.
and i have to admit the goddess' threat is a very
chilling one. especially if she shows yuusha what
his beloved poppa did to save his sire. i believe
the boy would try and kill sesshomaru. megumi would
probably be disappointed and hurt that her dear father treated her
poppa so badly. she probably wouldn't be able to look
at him anymore. as for mizuki i don't know if he
would try to kill sesshomaru like yuusha would but
he would definitedly hate him.

this story just gets better and better with each
chapter. i can't wait to see what happens next.

Yea I did notice that, I thought he was doing it Inu's sake. Major points earned here Sess. Major Points.

Update soon!!!

That was definitely steamy. And I LOVED it! I am such a perv. I'm glad InuYasha and Sesshouamru seem to be heading in the right direction. I wonder if that will last though. I think it would be interesting to see Yuusha try to get in the way again. He would definitely be the perfect meddler because Sesshouamru can't exactly "get rid" of him and InuYasha would go ballistic on Sesshouamru if the DaiYoukai ever tried to hurt the boy. XD Thanks for the update. Can't wait to read what happens next.

OMG!! You CAN'T have writer's block!!!! This is one of my all time favorite stories!!! I NEED it, to survive everyday, I look for new chapters multiple times a day!!! This story is the best!!!! PLEASE keep up the awesome work!!!

I loved this so much as far as ideas well Sessh needs to show Inuyasha through words, deeds, gifts, and looks how much he loves and wants Inuyasha how Inuyasha is and will always be first in his life. Sessh also needs to get everyone involved to help him win over Inuyasha's feers and stubborness from Grandma down to friends and I believe he would ask them because Sessh isn't stupid and he is a calculating deadly hunter and he is attempting to capture his most allusive and ultimate prey in a way he has never tried before so he would realize that he would need advice and help in it especially since he's never tried to woo anyone before. I also think he would ask the men first but ultimately ask the women more because their advice is usually the best since they are the ones who are usually wooed romatically but the women would also have to figure out how a male would be wooed which women should be able to do easily enough. Especially since Inuyasha is a fearful, brash, prideful young man but he is also extremely sensitive and caring to an extreme as well. Also I think that the two youngest ones would try to force them together in one way or another but the oldest Sessh would have to prove himself first to prove he's worth his love as well as his papa's the most important being in his life and if he can do that then his oldest would be his strongest and staunchiest supporter probably even the most devious in getting the two together. The oldest would do this especially if Sessh proved himself and then he saw how much Inuyasha needed love and support and caring in his life hopefully without Inuyasha being aware that his oldest saw him at any weak needful moments. Most important though they would have to keep Inuyasha confused and off balanced enough to prevent his fears and concerns from surfacing in his mind very often and just allowing pleasure and fun to invade his mind and senses. But above all I don't think Sessh should penetrate Inuyasha with anything other than hands and mouth until they both declare their love together and then it's so much more if he does then because it would be a powerful bonding and love and hopefully in a very romantic setting and after a day of family and fun. Well you wanted ideas here's a few and I love your story and can't wait for your next update I know no matter what you decide it will be awesome you are a really great writer.