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for Strength

by ajj77sunhawk

schedule May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
the tittle did not fit the whole chapter. mabe you could have from breakfeast to hot or something like that. love the all of it. update soon
person Vyper
schedule May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I seriously hope that Sesshoumaru can save Inuyasha. It would be so sad if he died at such a young age.
schedule May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sorry had not been reviewing for a while. I loved this chapter. The ending was what made sense for the title. I would think that after 'big' Sess claimed Inuyasha then 'little' Sess will back down and know that he can not be alpha just yet. Also I see this as step in healing Inuyasha more than just mentally and emotionally.
schedule May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Noooooo, fight the writers block...fight! As for the chapter it contained not only family fun time but naughty couples time as well! And the title most certainly does fit:-) Great chapter, look forward to the next one!!!
person Snowfall
schedule May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I didn't know that you had more chapters up! Nice lime! I didn't have a problem figuring out what Sesshoumaru had done. ^_^ Ooooh, way to go, Water Goddess! That was an excellent threat--the best! Even if it is a little down and dirty. It works though! ^_^

I really want to see what Sesshoumaru does next, what happens next. Will they have another go around during the night? Or, will Sesshoumaru let him go for another day? What will Inuyasha think once he wakes up all warm and comfy against an affectionate alpha? ^_^ Questions that only your can answer. ^_^
person Caitriona
schedule May 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think I'm still a little confused... How about another chapter to make sure I'm not. XD

No but really, this was a nice chapter. I am glad that the water goddess is watching over Inuyasha. I'm wondering what the "morning after" will be like for Inuyasha.
schedule May 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I didn't really believe it, but I think Inuyasha did. When he thinks about it later he might figure it out and ask/yell at Sesshomaru about it, though. I don't quite know if I appreciate what the Goddess did. It' good that she tries do dampen Sesshomaru's pride a bit, but I do ont like that she uses the children as a weapon. If Inuyasha really did die, wouldn't it be mean to take their only other family away? Because surely mini-Sesshy would not stay within 10 miles of Sesshomaru, and they need the protection and education and possible love that they can get there.
person midnightsweet
schedule May 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
go godess. what a way to show power with out doing anything. i know sessy was tring to be a gentilman. he is tring people. update soon
person kaylez24
schedule May 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Go you! Two chapters!!!
I appreciate the effort to appease your fans. LOL ;)

I feel I should also review.

Inu is going to be sooo surprised when he figures out Sess can go all night. Woo Hoo. (raunchy laughter in the background)

schedule May 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I so love that you are keeping the evil writers block away.....I loove this story I want happiness and rainbows, fluffy clouds and love flowing by the pounds, keep up great work can't wait till you update.

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