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for Strength

by ajj77sunhawk

person Snowfall
schedule June 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for clarifying Yuusha's intentions. His worry is sweet, and he's very perceptive. I think it's sad that he won't make amends with Sesshoumaru. After all, Inuyasha hid the children from him, though he might have been right in doing so. Perhaps, the near future will make a difference.

I sure hope that Sesshoumaru is able to find out what Inuyasha's state is. I wonder if the rain goddess would tell him, if he asked. At least, Inuyasha had a decent night. I'm glad for that.

Great chapter! Thanks!
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I so love this damn story please keep up great work and let inuyasha find out that shesshy loves him and we can get over this death wish that inu has for thinking that shesshy doesn't love him.........can't wait till you update.
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I want more =P I can't wait to see how Inu and shessy's relationship develop! ^_^
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WTF MORE MORE OMG THT WAS SOOO HOT I WANT MORE PLEASE!!!!!!! WITH COOKIES FROM THE DARKSIDE ON TOP!!!!!!!!!!!
person Princess Sin
schedule May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this was great and the title fit the chapter
perfectly. there were a few spelling errors
at the end but they weren't too bad. but there
was a sentence that didn't make since:

(Still kneeling Sesshoumaru kissed the relaxed penis in a strangely fond manner then he carefully Sesshoumaru Inuyasha so that he was sitting before him)

I couldn't understand that for a second. i assumed you meant something along the line of 'Sesshomaru positioning inuyasha so that he was sitting before him.' at least that's what i am guessing. but other than that and a few misspelled words the flow of the story was wonderful as always.

i just love it when yuusha would not let sesshomaru sit near him. it was too funny. and then sesshomaru had the gall to ask
inuyasha where the boy learned his arrogance from. inuyasha should have told him to take a look in the mirror and he would know where yuusha got his arrogance and possessiveness from. but t hen again, it's always funny when the mini sesshomaru makes his other father's life a hell.

and the ending of it was definitely hot! so, will inu end up pregnant or will you wait a while longer before inu will be pupped again? it would be interesting see how yuusha will react to inuyasha being pregnant again. can't wait until the next
chapter.
person Elvira
schedule May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yuusha and Sesshomaru are to funny. Both are the same and I can't wait till one snaps at the other.

Update soon!
person kaylez24
schedule May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Woo Hoo! Smut!
Finally Inu and Sess go all the way. And it was nice. Just what Inu needed to really understand he has a choice and a role other than brood mare.
I hope he doesn't regress and stubbornly try to keep himself from falling in love with Sess.
person Snowfall
schedule May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that was a beautiful chapter. I love how Sesshoumaru is being so considerate of Inuyasha. It's hard to believe that it's possible. I hope that Yuusha doesn't turn out to be a big problem. At some point, he really needs to submit to Sesshoumaru's authority, unless they plan to share Inuyasha. Hehehe. Nice chappie!
person Anon
schedule May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story's awesome, I hope everything turns out for the better!!! no writer's block please =3
person blueesky200
schedule May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. I just started reading the first chapter today and haven't stopped until I got to the end. Wonderful.