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I'M LOVING IT, I'M LOVING IT, I'M LOVING IT! I wonder how this ceremony is suppose to work but I hope that it will and Sess and Inu can be together and more puppies XD!! Please update soon

Wow! That was fast. Thank you, thank you. Ah! I am jumping up and down in my seat waiting for Sess to finally get his ass into gear and get a clue about his brother! Ah, pulling at my hair, I tell ya. Mark him damnit! Opps, sorry got carried away.

Oh my god oh my god oh my god. I loved it soooooooooooo much and I can't wait to see how this ritual works out to help Inuyasha. You are so right Inuyasha would never had agreed to be the center of attention like that or would not have accepted all the accolades from the other demons without a little sneakiness on the part of everyone else and lord knows they would all have agreed and willingly helped so this chapter was totally awesome. God I love your imagination and you have kept everyone right in character and I love that to. Thank you thank you I love this story where do you get these amazing ideas and your writing is so good to I am so jealous and quite thankful your willing to share it all. Well enough gushing I'm probably embarrassing you or something so let me just say I'll be waiting for your next update.

HOPE WE GET SOMEWHERE SOON.

Love this story! Just reviewing to help you with a minor grammar thing. I've noticed you often use "breathe" when it would actually be "breath." Below is an example from chapter 13. (the first paragraph is just there so that it's easier to figure out where the section is from)

Any time you mangy wolf.” Inuyasha said as he spared Kouga a quick, feral grin, it felt good to verbally spar with the wolf, almost like old times. Then he looked back at Sesshoumaru and sobered. “Look Sesshoumaru, let's just focus on the securing the pup's future okay, the other stuff, it does not matter. I know you claimed my death, but I don't think the pups would be able to accept you if you actually killed me. So when the time comes, I'll make it a death you can be proud of okay?” Inuyasha said with his now familiar blank smile, he had 'seen' his death, planned it so many times in the last seven years, he had accepted it and the part of him that had given up on himself ,yearned for the peace it would bring.

He wanted to live for his children, but for himself – he was utterly convinced that there was nothing to live for, he was tired, he was so damn tired. Still, until his last breathe, {{{there it is! should be breath}}} he would persevere, take what ever pain was dished out, keep standing and keep fighting. In his death, he would make them proud of him.

Now I'll explain the difference. Breath is used in places like the above. Also, : "Your breath smells" or "I can see my breath in the cold air." Breathe is used in sentences like this: "I cannot breathe underwater" and "A dead person does not breathe."

Makes sense? Try putting both words into Dictionary.com and listening to the pronunciation. That'll go a long ways to getting in straight in your head. Worked best for me, anyways! Good luck and keep updating!

Could the solution be mating? Please let it be so. PLEASE!!! Why is Sesshouamru so FOOLISH. Good intentions, very poor execution. Maybe seeing Kouga get friendly with InuYasha and his kids (especially Yuusha) would finally open his eyes. I really hope he gets his act together soon.

This was a sweet chapter but now you really have me curious as to what Sesshoumaru found and why Inuyasha wouldn't like it. And I was thrilled to read about Kouga and Inuyasha just having fun cause Inuyasha really doesn't have enough fun and laughter in his life and needs as much as possible. I love the fact that Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha go to sleep with Sesshoumaru still deep inside Inuyasha that is so sweet and romantic and intimately loving I LOVE IT totally. God I'm enjoying this story so much thank you so much for sharing it. I'll be waiting for the next update.

Yes Sess is frustrating. He in his own way is being considerate, affectionate even. And if Inu was another full demon, he might appreciate Sess as he is. But Inu was raised by humans, he is used to human forms of affection. So Sess just comes off as one cold b*stard.

WOW this is wonderful in every sense of the word...I have to admit even though I love In/Sess as a pair I would for Kouga to challenge Sess for Inu's affections...ah maybe in another fic of yours ^_^

Great job!

Nice bridge chapter. As far as Sesshoumaru's sense...good luck. The guy is as dense as a rock. Ask RT. ^_^ Avoiding the marking isn't helping either, even if he is trying to take Inuyasha's feelings into consideration. They need to have a fight or something. That always seems to work as a productive conversation. LOL They both seem to lose composure when they fight. It might be the only way. ^_^