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for Strength

by ajj77sunhawk

person Vyper
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It is so awsome that now Inuyasha is Sesshoumaru's mate. Thanks for the new chapter. I really love this story.
person chanii
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
so happy to read another chapter but you seem so tired...Sending you positive vibes.
person nm1716
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the new update and can't wait to see what happens next.
person Caitriona
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading the ceremony. I will admit, when I first read that you were going to do some kind of ceremony 'heal' Inuyasha, I was upset. I wanted Sess to realize that it was his love and his caring that was what was needed. Then as I read the piece itself, I realized that you were basically just giving Sess a little more time and Inuyasha a little more energy to make it through the rigors ahead. No more upset. Then I realized that I rather liked the ceremony. I liked that you pulled in the hindi elements (as so many of the things we originally interpret as Japanese had their roots in the Indian subcontinent). The thing I like the most though was the ending where Sess officially bound himself to Inuyasha as his mate. It seemed far more that he was announcing his own binding to Inuyasha than Inuyasha being bound to him. I hope that Inuyasha realizes that and what it really means to him.

All in all a lovely couple of chapters. Thanks for writing for us!!
person Princess Sin
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this was well worth the wait. i checked out the sighte for the Ganesha Yantra
and it was quite intriguing. but i guess in your story to make it work. it didn't
completely purfiy what was wrong with inuyasha. only sesshomaru opening his heart
to him can inuyasha be saved. i guess this ceremony will give inuyasha more time
so he will be able to get pregnant. is that why sesshomaru did this ceremony?
well, i can't wait until the next chapter.
person Snowfall
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful ceremony. I hope it helps. Oooh, Sesshoumaru mated him in public!? Totally awesome! I'm so glad that Sesshoumaru finally did it, and he did it in a way that shows Inuyasha that he isn't ashamed. Simply wonderful! I wonder if Yuusha will be angry. Loved the detail. I'm curious about the eight pointed star. Could you email me more about its meaning? I know that practitioners of Chaos magic use it as their symbol.

Anywho, awesome job! ^_^ Can't wait to see what happens next! *warm fuzzies*
person Vyper
schedule June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It is about time that Inuyasha got something good. I hope that he can be saved by Sesshoumaru. It seems that a mating is needed however even if Inuyasha did not concieve yet. I believe that being mated to Sesshoumaru would at least give Inuyasha some sense of peace and it would let him know that Sesshoumaru did love him.
schedule June 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
SQUEE!! And update *dances* I love how you planned this all out and I can't wait to see/read the ceremony!
person my_perversities
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG you updated soooo fast!!! I LOVE YOU!!!! HA HA Inu was in for quite the shock with that surprise party just for him eh/?? Poor Inu, hates the spotlight and has been forced into it. lol. Well, I hope you can crunch out the next chapter quickly too, I can't wait to see what happens in this ceremony..does he get changed to a full demon?? Sooo excited.
person Snowfall
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sesshoumaru is sneaky! You're right; Inuyasha would have probably run from the celebration had he known that it was mainly for him. It's a sweet thing that Sesshoumaru is doing and I hope it helps Inuyasha. I have to wonder if this is the night that Sesshoumaru mates Inuyasha. ^_^ Are you going to allow us to see the rituals? BTW, thanks for the review of my last chappie. ^_^