rate_review Reviews

Wow! The mating was just superb! I couldn't have imagined anything so beautiful and powerful!

You truly have a gift, and not in a million years would I dare to tell you to speed up things or change anything at all!! This is YOUR STORY, you are the writer, and so far you have done such an excellent job that to even attempt to try and change any of the wonderful things you have done with this story would be a sacrilege!

Everything has been amazing! Every detail, every word, every scene, every emotion!! You are the architect and you deserve the glory for the story! No one else should complain of how you do your own creation! We are here merely to admire it and rejoice in the beauty of it all!! The way you have done everything is what makes people come back over and over! With so many stories out there, people have many choices, so it is a show of utter admiration for your work that keeps us coming back for more!

This story is addictive and so well crafted! Even the erotic parts are so well done that they incite fire among those that read them! It is contagious!

Once again, I am amazed at your talent and sincerely hope that you will update again soon!! (I know, I am greedy, but what can I say? This story is SO GOOD!)

So please! Let your muses free reign of your mind and update soon!

Thank you again for writing and sharing such an amazing tale!

Hugs:

MidCat

Wow this story is so awesome I can't wait to read more. BTW, is the mating mark puppy ears by any chance? The way it seems everyone laughed I just assumed that's what it is. Hope I'm righ! And believe you me, I love reading epic stories so I like that its a bit more drawn out. Less sometimes is not more. Keep up with the great work.

hey you never said what sesshomaru's mating mark was. i was hoping
to find out because i wanted to know what everyone found so amusing
about it.

There has been very, very few times when a fanfic has made me turn around and say WOW! I was wrong!

So, I had to take the time to write this down, because certainly, this is one of those times!! You see, I am a HUGE Inuyasha fanfic whore! I have been devouring fanfics for 5+ years. Every day. I have read thousands of stories and after a while you think you have seen it all and nothing new comes out that can take your mind away, but WOW!!

First, because I have NEVER been a fan of Yaoi. I can read it and like it OK, but never follow a series, or think much of it.
Second, because I I made the HUGE mistake of overlooking this story the first time.
And Third, because I have to apologize (Not that I mind, it is well earned).

Your story has everything a great story needs, a VERY ORIGINAL PLOT, great characters, ORIGINALITY, ORIGINALITY, ORIGINALITY! And to top it all it has brought forth so many emotions that I can honestly say that I was glued to the monitor, reading every letter, every word, every paragraph, and after each chapter thinking: WOW!! This is amazing!! This is so good!

I remember a couple of chapter when even tears came out!! And that is rare now a days for me!! But the story was so moving, so full of angst, of deep emotions and feelings that run so deeply it almost felt as if I was there and could see it with my own eyes!

Inuyasha's pain, resignation, humility, and extreme love for his children is something that is so deeply moving that I found myself moved to every fiber of my heart!

Sesshomaru is so on character is just impossible not to picture him doing and saying as you write it! It trully is a beautiful story!

And now that Sesshomaru has a chance at redemption it has been erotic and movingf to see how he treats Inuyasha and his insecurities, his fears, his vulnerabilities!

I love the way you portray Inu! He is sensitive, but not a wimp! He can be a strong warrior and a tender sweet loving father and you manage to combine both flawlessly!!

The childrens' personalities are very well done and I love each and every one!

I can honestly say that you have a new fan on me! I apologize for my HUGE oversight, and for the first time since I began reading fanfic, I can say that now I am a fan of Yaoi!!

You made every scene flow beautifully! It was sensually erotic, romantic, and very tender! I can honestly say that I am dying to find out what happens next!!

I will wait with anticipation for your next update, which I hope it will be soon!!
Is there a mailing list or a way to get notified when you update? Or perhaps if you post this story in another site that allows subscriptions I would be very happy to sing up!! Please let me know! Thank you in advance!

Thank you for writing such an amazing story, and for sharing it with us!

Many hugs and admiration:

MidCat

Please, please, please, continue! This story is more than amazing and waiting for updates is almost agonizing!! Hope you feel inspired to write until the world ends!

Ack! What does the mark Inu gave Sessho look like? Dieing to know. Totally right about trying to fix things without talking. Would that be a macho-male syndrome?

God this story is so beyond awesome. It doesn't matter to me where you take it as long as Inuyasha doesn't die and he and Sesshoumaru end up together. I can not wait for the next update and I really want Inuyasha to have more pups with his alpha's help as it should be. Can't wait to see Yuusha's reaction should be interesting.

That was beautiful. It's a bit bittersweet but I still absolutely love it. Can't wait to see the pups' reactions. And I think I love the other DaiYoukai for tormenting the clueless Sesshoumaru for a while.

Whoa! Wow! Ok I did say that Sess has to work from the inside out, but I didn't think he would start from the bottom. I had a feeling that Inu would start to have feelings for him, buyt wouldn't that make it it harder for Sess to have to work past the love Inu has for him to get to the hurt and pain? I do have a request for maybe a one-shot, two-shot or a short fic about the relationship of Sess and his first born after this story. It would be nice to see how things are between them after he sees that Sess really does love his father and trying to make things better for all of them. You know like the later years.

Hey it's me. Took getting hit by a truck to finally sit down and review. I think the battle should be more of an internal battle for Sess to fight. Meaning that in order to fix the outside (Inu's blemishes and scars) He has to fix his broken spirit. Get him to see that he is valuable to him, wanted, cherished and needed. Not just to make babies and work out frustration, but loved above all else. Inuyasha though mated needs to be wooed. It will be enough of a struggle for Inuyasha to believe fully that he's not being used while Sesshoumaru works from the inside out at the same time proving to not only his mate, but to the children as well that he is a changed man.