rate_review Reviews

The moment when the beta finally died really made me want to cry. It was just so tragically perfect.

sweet story

Hallelujah! Does this mean that Sessy might actually be on his way to *talk* to Inuyasha? Maybe work on figuring some things out *verbally*? I love that he found that passage, because their misunderstandings of each other's motivations is driving me crazy! Never seen such a dialogue-challenged couple!! Sessy thinking he's being so noble and accommodating and Inuyasha thinking he's not worth consulting about decisions and that he has no right to even question Sessy's actions or whereabouts! Arrggghhh!( Though, I love them to death and think this fic is beyond awesome.) :)

I think it would be great if they could hash out some of the more long-term issues (seriously, the ultimate submission was chapter one & Sessy is just now figuring out how badly he's been screwing up? Arrghhh!!) but I do enjoy the story pacing...waiting for updates can be a killer (even if it's only 24 hrs), but that's beside the point. I like the angst, but feel like maybe Inuyasha could be thrown a bone? A little one? Maybe have his partner next to him in the morning? Even once? Or maybe a raging Sesshoumaru will storm back from the library to catch Inuyasha in one of his fits? Please, please, please? Just a little bone...then the pregnancy horrors can commence. (sigh)

My 2c. Sorry for missing chapters. Try to limit how often I check updates b/c it's really sad for me when there's no new chapters. Love the ears mating mark, btw. Didn't guess that...my mind was significantly lower in the gutter w/the "get lots of enjoyment comment." ^_~

Keep up the great and interesting story. I rarely see a story with such fleshed out characters who are so flawed but lovable. The pups are particular favorites.

Cheers,
Rae

really great chappie soooo can't wait till they tell the pups and hopeful sesshou didn't mess up again.

I really hope Sesshoumaru doesn't take out his anger on Inuyasha. If anything he should be apologizing and explaining to his brother. I'm glad the puppies were finally conceived. It's finally time for this couple to heal together.

I love this. And please don't let anyone push you-I think the story pace is perfect.

This was both a beautifully sensual and seductive chapter, but also a beautifully angsty chapter. If Sess is kicking himself over the mating I can't wait to see what Sess does when he discovers Inu's morning torments. Thank you so so so much for writing this for us. This is one of my favorites to read.

I think I may be a little slow tonight but I don't get the ending at all. What did Sesshoumaru do wrong and how for heavens sake. I loved the lemon that was fantastic and very hot. I almost did a little dance when Inuyasha found out he was carrying man I have been waiting for that wow your imagination is really something else I just loooooooovvvvveeee ittttttt. Thank you so much for sharing can't wait to see what happens next.

when you put it like that

I love it Sesshu should have Inu's ears as his mark. I love this story and hope to see more of it