You are a brilliant author! I read ALL the posted chapters in 2 days. I've neglected all of my studies (currently doing finals) because I was captivated by your words and imagination. Some aspects of this story spoke to me on another level! The pace you set, the character development....I cried, I laughed, I was even jealous too. I will be searching for ALL your work!
Did you just recon Egyptian mythology? It is at that point I officially fell in love with this story and your writing.
Ok so we get to the chapter with the kiddos and the oldest defending SesshÅmaru, which is great, but he is saying words he couldn't before. I get this series was written awhile back but this is like the only thing I dislike. The child go from acting their age to acting like adults when it comes to their speech. Which I guess is normal for 8 years old but there isn't much in terms of consistency.
And I have reached the end of this amazing story. You did such a good job!. I am a happy camper right now and am so glad that I found this.
“Ya that was where the pathetic Hanyou killing stupid ass chicken Gods of suck-your-momma’s-thumb lived.”
Ah, ajj7sunhawk, you crack me up xD I love fanfic lol
This story is far more realistic in the development of emotions, especially with those of Sesshomaru (gotta consider the effects of instinct vs. already established emotional boundaries and psyche!), and InuYasha's journey from essentially being forced to do something that betrays everything he was by people that didn't understand and wouldn't take the time to listen, through events that changed how he see his world so drastically and triggered a self-preservation mechanism that was destroying him from inside out, to slowly realizing that maybe, just possibly, he's not worthless and deserving of all the terrible things that have happened to him.
I'm not even close to being done with what chapters that are out, but I still wanted to say what an amazing job you've done :) ...re-reading my review makes me think that I've been awake too long, since I don't normally talk like that. I jut didn't want to say too much about the contents of the story, yet still say how much I'm enjoying the story progression. Keep up the good work!