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I loved IT!!!!! please update more...

I would love to see kouga's reaction :D to kagome's mark :D

I will tell you what!! Your story deserves a lot more reviews than just meager 5 so far. It is very well written, I like the way you actually tried to show what Inuyasha thinks. It also came over convincingly, I believe that he could think that way. I also liked the way you showed Kikyo´s real character. In fact, I never liked her, she didnt treat Inuyasha well, not before she died and definately not after. That supposedly serene, but arrogant way of hers is so annoying. Plus, how could ask Inuyasha to become human? Grrrrr. So yeah, I liked the way you depicted Kikyou, it hit the mark indeed.
I also liked when Inuyasha kicked Hojo out, I only thought it was a pity you didnt make it a little more obvious for Hojo, that Inuyasha is Kagomes boyfriend. Yeah, Inuyasha said Kagome was his, but still, I would have enjoyed a little more of it!!!
The seduction part was really sweet.... but I would have omitted that stamina part. That was somewhat weird, as stamina comes with sexual experience and there is no way a horny teenager who has sex for the first time could last 2 rounds. I think it would be a lot sweeter, had you written that part in a more realistic way (=he didnt last long). You could have made it, that his demonic blood makes it possible for him to have an errection again and again, no matter how many times he has come. But well, thats a matter of taste and a silly detail really.

I think your story is wonderful, but inuyasha in the last chapter his dialouges were way too much broken English, very non inuyasha like. It kinda drags the last chapter down in that aspect. Just thought you should know, maybe change it to how he really talks.

Very sweet! Wonderful story! I love Inuyasha's POV! Please do more stories like this!! ^_^

That was a great story, I passed it by a few times but I am so glad I finally read it! The other reviewer was correct,I love Inuyasha POV stories and you don't get to read many of them that feel as right as this one did. Holy cow, please tell me you are going to write more or a sequel, what's with Kagome's fangs, you can't just drop that little bomb and run, more more more!! And what did Kagome mean when she said at the end when they walked into the bathroom and she said "Don’t tell me you don’t plan on doing that again?”, why was Inuyasha so touched, did she just mean the act of making love or did I miss something there? Anyway, great story, please share more with us!

Very, very nice!
I like this InuYasha, his thoughts and emotions.

Is there more?

I loooooooved it!! Honestly there are not enough InuYasha POV stories and this one is very well written.
Thank you for sharing! :)

This is one of the most stimulating, well-written stories I've ever read. I do hope this was not the last chapter, because I enjoyed it well too much. The end was funny - in a word: perfect. It's a realistic point of view, and I really liked that. You're a talented writer, great job :)