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for The Brothers' Slave

by LordYouko

person syndey
schedule May 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Next chapter pleaz I am dying to read what happens next I love this story
person elliotsoul
schedule December 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
your story is very interesting i like sess/inu better then sess/mir but good story cant wait for the next chapter ^^
person ardentes
schedule November 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am definitely partial to Sesshoumaru/Inuyasha pairings but I liked the Sess/Miroku pairing as well. I like this story so far and I am curious as to if you plan to continue it. I like this story as well as many other of your stories! I do hope you update soon! I enjoy reading your writings immensely!
person merlyn1382
schedule September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
they were both really good i couldn't decide which one was better
person chibinelly
schedule August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is so funny ! I love this story and I really like Sesshoumaru's character in this fic. Poor Inuyasha, didn't get any help from Daddy ! hehe :-D
person chibinelly
schedule August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter. Well I liked Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha lemon best because I'm a die hard Sess and Inu fan. It's fun to see Inuyasha being submissive with Sesshoumaru. I hope you'll find time to update this and your other amazing stories soon !
schedule August 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well I'm a SessInu fan so of course I preferred the SessInu lemon =)
person clarissa
schedule July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I liked Sess/Miro scene better its just remnds me of the whole survival of the fttest sort of thing where the lion pounces on the small frightned gazell. Also with Sess and Inu i cant get by his brash harsh nature for him to be seen as submissive. You should make it as if both brothers fall for Miroku but in there own ways and Miroku can't decide which one he wants to be with more whch starts ths whole angst thng og the brothers trying to force Miroku to stay with him which only causes Miroku to go into depression and secluson or maybe even mysteriously run away for th couple weeks but in the end they just share him and continue to love him more. Just add alot more sex, heartache,angst,and drama an it will be perfect. Like the story so far continue on can't wait to read more.
person seshoumaruprincess515
schedule February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Luv it, nice/naughty story.....more chapies?
person natasha
schedule January 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
really great story line, so can't wait for more to come.