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for You're My Everything

by LordYouko

person LadyKitten
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this so far, I cant wait to see what happens next! If your lookin for ideas how about Sess tying up inuyasha and letting a few of his guards at him, that just seems so fun to me hehe anywho I LOVE your story!
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story and I think a great twist would be InuYasha finding out that he has competition for the sub part...say Miroku...and that would make it very interesting those two vying for Sess's feet/affection. Just a suggestion...
person natasha
schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved this story so much that i had to read it again, please update soon.
schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
poor inu, but he likes it. getting nicem and hot. up date soon
person nchsmi
schedule December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh I h8 cliffhangers! Very sexy little story u got here. I'm looking 4ward 2 reading more. Til next time...

B reading U!
schedule December 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG Make another, you're a genius >:D
I love every minute of it!!!
schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor InuYasha! I liked how you did this chapter and that you gave him a mark of some sort. Thank you for a great story.
schedule December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far, I will enjoy read more of it if you write it
schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hm... I'll have to wait and see what Sesshoumaru did to Inuyasha's neck. I'm not guessing. ;)
schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello! Just stumbled upon your story and I'm liking it so far. A few grammar/spelling mistakes, but no one's perfect. I suggest you not have a "Last time" part before your new chapters. If someone forgets what happened last time, they can go back and check for themselves. It's a tad bit annoying to have that at the beginning of everything. Anywho, looking forward to reading more!