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for You're My Everything

by LordYouko

schedule April 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
He better have one heck of an appology for inuyasha. update soon!
person Vyper
schedule April 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great stoy so far. I feel for poor Inuyasha. I hope that at some point Sesshoumaru will be tender with him and maybe even find that his little brother is the love he has been waiting for his whole life.
person Lollipopzcandies
schedule March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like where this is going. Keep it up!
person Mary
schedule February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
An erection of more than 4 hours can cause damage to the tissues in a cock. 2 days would definitely cause some serious damage. Perhaps you could change some of the text in this chapter to reflect that? Perhaps Sess would allow Inu's erection to slowly wane, only to awaken it again. That would leave Inu in the same constant state of nervousness (will he allow me to finish this time or will it be like all the others!) without the damage the lack of blood flow through the tissues would cause.
schedule January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haha. Oh my god, yes! We get to see a jealous Sesshomaru next chapter. :D
Though really, he shouldn't be jealous; it's his fault for putting himself in the situaton in the first place.

I think this next chapter is going to be very interesting. I'm very much looking forward to reading it.
schedule January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh Hell No!!! Please tell me he is not going to service Kouga. That's just too much.
person Elvira
schedule January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Inu! Sad!

Update soon! Love it!
person nchsmi
schedule January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG...I can't believe that Sesshomaru is gonna share his 'slave' with anyone! But, what if Kouga likes it, and decides to keep InuYasha? Or if InuYasha decides that Kouga might make a better dominate? Then, what would Sesshomaru do? I love the chapter, but I hate cliffies. Please update soon, I can't wait to read what happens next!

B reading U!
schedule January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loving this story so far, I can't wait to read what else you have written. The kinks and the displays of submission you come up with seem so brutal and beastial, so fitting for Sesshomaru. And seriously, don't give a flying fuck what that "ThinkPink" says. Honestly, it's your story, and your vision, no one else's. I think the characters are very lifelike; Inuyasha was very emotionally attached to the gang in the story and probably would become suicidial without them. Stay the course, and update soon!!!
person Shaquana
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is.....DUN-DUN-DUUUUUUN!!!! Love the story, keep going!