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What a sweet story! I would love to read more about Inuyasha's pregnancy :D

why did you stop it was sssssooooo goood don't stop write tell what happens in the future or somethin give me more more more.............love this story just want more.....

Hot. :) I do have to say it's hard to believe they would have this conversations even though u started out well with it and gave good reason. I loved the encounter the most. :)

oh no! you can't end it like this. i want to know what
happens. what will the others do when they find out
and what about inu being pregnant? you should at least
make maybe one or two more chapters if you don't feel
like doing anything longer. although it would be great
if you did but that would be up to you. so, atleast
think about adding more onto this because this was
a great story.

nice!

update soon!

The way you end this it feels like you could make it into a chapter fic. You have left it up to us to fill in the blanks as to what happened when both groups came to get as one. In my version Kagome got ready to sit Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru b*tch slapped her (pun intended) before the word even left her mouth. The charm was removed from a punishment for Inuyasha to one for Kagome. She wouldn't be slammed to the ground, but everytime Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha got away for sometime alone she was awake and could hear just how happy they made each other. I would put more here but this just gave me an idea for part of a new fic that I want to write.

You'll write more, right? Please! Please! I want more! As fast as you can! XD I had so much fun reading this!

WAAAHHH!! you can't end it here.....you have to continue. What happens when the others get back....What about Inu being preg.....need more...please...contiue this story!!!!

i am SO rooting for a second part, i want to see kagome go ballistic that she can´t have inu, not to mention our beloved puppy´s reaction once he realizes that sess knocked him up. sango will probably ok with it, shippo+rin ecstatic about having each other to play with, pervert miroku will try to spy on them having sex and jaken complain about everything until he gets clobbered...the only reaction i can´t predict is kouga...delighted to have no more competition for kagome? scared of sess?

Damn what a story! Great job, it's just too bad that it's a oneshot. I would have loved to see more development for it. I would have loved to read the reactions from both groups. I know Kagome and Jaken would have a fit, but the rest would be cool. Especially, Rin and Shippo. They would probably just think of them as their parents! I hope you will do a sequel to this. Maybe after Sesshomaru and Inu's pup(s) are born, and Rin and Shippo become big sister and brother to them. But, all in all, you did an excellent job with this! Thank you for posting it.

B reading U!