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July 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
*flails then flops onto floor* This is a really good story! I lurve it!
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April 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Do you need a beta? While I'm not really a beta, I can help you with spelling until you do find one.
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January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think Sasuke should turn out to also be,not just the demons mate but Naruto's too.
Why? Naruto needs an HUMAN mate and I think he'd be good for the combination, not just because another human mate would help with the four demons (learning how to handle human fragility, handling human minds, etc.)but having the four demons will balance Sasuke out.
Think about it, he's an orphan like Naruto (NOT counting Itachi)so now he would have five new family members to love and care for him. That's four demon and one human mate to protect him from his brother.
Not just that I think half the reason Sasuke is so obsessed with avenging his clan is that he is alone so it is the only thing he actually has. I think with Naruto and the demons he would find LOTS to occupy his time and after a while he'll find he doesn't need it as much as he THOUGHT he did or does.
I think his four demon mates would actually calm and mellow him, Naruto will have another ninja in his family to help strengthen and train him and vice versa and if it comes to it, Itachi and the group of enemy nins will be NO MATCH for them.
I have this image in my head of Sasuke sitting in Sesshomaru's lap, riding him in ecstasy while Naruto licks his nipples, Kyuubi taking Naruto behind and Kouga kissing Sasuke while YOU-KNOW-WHO strokes Naruto all over.
Why? Naruto needs an HUMAN mate and I think he'd be good for the combination, not just because another human mate would help with the four demons (learning how to handle human fragility, handling human minds, etc.)but having the four demons will balance Sasuke out.
Think about it, he's an orphan like Naruto (NOT counting Itachi)so now he would have five new family members to love and care for him. That's four demon and one human mate to protect him from his brother.
Not just that I think half the reason Sasuke is so obsessed with avenging his clan is that he is alone so it is the only thing he actually has. I think with Naruto and the demons he would find LOTS to occupy his time and after a while he'll find he doesn't need it as much as he THOUGHT he did or does.
I think his four demon mates would actually calm and mellow him, Naruto will have another ninja in his family to help strengthen and train him and vice versa and if it comes to it, Itachi and the group of enemy nins will be NO MATCH for them.
I have this image in my head of Sasuke sitting in Sesshomaru's lap, riding him in ecstasy while Naruto licks his nipples, Kyuubi taking Naruto behind and Kouga kissing Sasuke while YOU-KNOW-WHO strokes Naruto all over.
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December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Stuck for a title? Or is this the true title? If not, what about "Of Dogs And Foxs"?
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November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cute story and I love that Naruto is Uke to all the major players of InuYasha.
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November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the premise of the story and it is so cute to have Inu, Sess, and the guy gang of InuYasha in with Naruto that makes for an unorthodox story which I like. The only thing I could see wrong was some sentence problems but they weren't enough to make me stop reading by any means. And a cool idea would be for Kyuubi to give the mates some real fun and trouble...yeah know like Kyuubi tells them how Naruto is really treated. Thank you for a good story and I look forward to more.
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October 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
funny...I think that this story has possiblities and I look forward to seeing more.